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ok prodigy ya structure was off you need to work on that
but i liked ya punches and mettas need some more personals tho
da truth you had some good punches and ok structure thats why you took this one

Da Truth gets my vote

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Mn, I won this already, now I have too many battles open.

Although I ain't really like either of the verses that much im votin for Prod.
His had beter better punchlinea and half of the other dudes ain't make sense(no offense) so of the punches in his wwere aight though

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chose winners verse....


Expell Jolts of Force, decimating strong holds wit a Passionate Glow
You chose the Wrong Pro coz yo style's bout as Average as Joe
good punch......nice flow......
I start Rappin a Flow n begin Bashin ya Skull wit Tactics I Wrote
I'll have em cry a river, build a bridge over it, n charge this Faggot a Toll
once again good punch...better than opener......keep hittin like this you'll win
So much Bull shit comes out yo mouth that when u spit, Plants'll Just Grow
Hide like Rabbits in Holes,I wear u out, throw u in the Hamper with Clothes
this lines a little played....but you changed the wordplay around..so it was all good
I "came hard" on you like a dick, shit, what was I Supposed To Do?
Coz in battles, U'r Like President Bush ....Only stupid people Vote for U
nice punch....your verse keeps gettin better and better....
So why Try This? You're Spineless, U'r so weak that U x Me = a Minus
+ Yo rhymes wouldn't even "go gold" if they were touched by King Midas
dope closer...when i heard it i was like "damn".....

vote/da truth

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Was a pretty good battle...Pro the only thing that I wasnt really feelin was a few of your rhymes were kinda streched, you coulda made em rhyme a lil better. The flow was decent once i got the hang of it, i had to read it a couple time to feel where you were comin from...but it was tight. Some nice punches, multies were here and their kinda hit and miss, which took away from your flow. The metas were decent but I just thought you coulda worked on more of them.

Datruth29 I think this was the best verse ive seen from you yet. The flow was very good, could be flowed slow or fast and switched up easy...I was feelin it. The Metas were nice, I liked the bridge one, and kind midas very nice. Punches coulda been better I thought, and no personaly either. Vocab was nice and was really making sense, I notice a lot of people use scholar words and dont make sense...so that was a bonus. Just the overall structure and additives in your verse made it sound much harder than his, which gave you the clear edge.

Good battle though...no beef...BIG UPS

v/Datruth29

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yo is it 4-1? or wat still uppin