Ok This Was A Ok Battle

Troop..You Some Nice Vocab But Not Really No Punches Or personals But You Had A NiCe Drop....

Dv8..You Need 2 Go At Your Opponent More Also Punches And You Need Punches And You Lacked Vocab....

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IP: D135 D6AF


Rb kno i got Punches... that will mos def have ya Ass Gaspin
Supply Karate kicks 2 ya like the kid off of The Last Dragon

NiCe 8/10

accepted this battle~kid thinks im a punk~but not so,
youre at best top soil~imma dunk~ this kid in slow mo,

7/10 Kinda Weak No creativity..

Closer

Guarranteed that this Faggot Fem can catch em Like his whole squad Men?
No Hesitatin Here ni99a i Slip and Slide Hustle mo rocks than Tyrone Bigums

Ok 8/10


3 K.O's but~this ones mine~you've just stepped into a battle field,
ya ~mines blown~could'nt win this battle if you were sittin on a shield,

ok 7/10

Winner Troop

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Dv8 gets da vote here

structureV
multi.:Troop
flowV
Punches:same

R.I.P. 2 all da falln soliders
shouts 2 ad 9-1-9 and da 2-5-2 and my crew Mosiac
Im still on da blok for ya "Hustle Hard Inc."

check...http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136749
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136311
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136748

There wasnt alot of creativity in this battle. It was kept simple. Not really any personals but I saw some good punches by DV. Dont get me wrong Troop brought his A-Game. He had a betta vocab but I saw some stretched lines that kinda threw me outta flow.

After reading it the first time I was going with troop, but it was close so I read again. Then I caught a lot more things in DV8's post. DV8 had good wordplay, good punches, a good opener, and an alright closer. Troop had alright punches, a good opener, and a bad closer.

V/ DV8

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Wait for you there
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closer: J trooper i bet half y'all didn't understand that..
wordplay: J Trooper
style/ creativity: both
personals: close but both

J Trooper came hittin' hard but DV8 tried to come back attackin' like a muthafukka.. DV8 needed to work on his vocab but nice flow, nigga fa real.. This was a close battle not a bad drop from either one of you but i must give to the one who came harder..

my vote/ J Trooper

~wun~

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Vote jTrooper
he had harder hitting punches and a better flow and better wordplay,
Not really any personals but still good battle none the less
DV8 you got some skills and you will elevate more doing battles like this
props to both



http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136525

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arent personals supposed ta win battles???damn im gettin fucked cause no1's sein da personals,,,goo'battle,but i think it was closer than that.....uppin for votes...

J TROOP's
Rb kno i got Punches... that will mos def have ya Ass Gaspin
Supply Karate kicks 2 ya like the kid off of The Last Dragon
Hot Opener..8/10
DV'8... hung on my Meat. so this dame Cough'n and Gaggin
O So Disgustin how i experience more head than an Asprin
Second Line in bar Doesn't particularly pertain to the battle..6/10
If you cant Defeat me fuck it The most Yung and Gifted Fuck it
u Mede'oKer but my Approach put me on base like Kirby Puckett
Verbal Terminal Lashins have me like Carmelo all ova ya Nugget
only good line was third......5/10
My Intensions ..2 Be Kicked back... in a Purple Merche'Ahlogo
DV8'Z Dame fixin me Waffles put 23 on her back like Mj in Chicago
What dis gotta do wit the battle fam..kinda liked the last line...6/10
Hey 8 keep runnin off wit ya Soup Coolers basically keep runnin ya Lips
and Watch me send u bulletz as long as Rulers turn ya into P-Cake Mix
Whasn't really a punch...General Statement...6/10
Guarranteed that this Faggot Fem can catch em Like his whole squad Men?
No Hesitatin Here ni99a i Slip and Slide Hustle mo rocks than Tyrone Bigums
Not a good closer ..... 5/10

36/60....Overal...Decent Verse.....Yu Spit betta tho....

DV's
accepted this battle~kid thinks im a punk~but not so,
youre at best top soil~imma dunk~ this kid in slow mo,
Yu fucked dis line wit the irrelevance of the second line....3/10
see j im the inside like beer is in the bottle~n im really drunk,
you the outside~like a label gettin peeled~tossed in the trunk,
Uh...Not really feelin dis line.....4/10...
ya crews~murder mitten~guess you advertise ya hands are cold,
this dudes a ~cowardly kitten~watch how this pussies legs fold,
Decent...7/10....i think there was unintentional wordplay..but u got the benifit of the doubt
this kid likes ta put Z's on,its his style"like he's something special",
watch me sneeze"more mentals"than his prtoduced by his pencil,
Uh No......Wrong....Almost Whas Good..Last Line fuck'd it...5/10
in his p/m he said he was down,damn i don't wanna know that,
admittedly on his knees,keep da fetish ta yourself n da "cock"fat,
.....3/10
honestly kid,obviously just using my name makes your verse better,
im drunk n still beat you,if half my verse was missing half the letters,
YUR ONE GOOD PUNCH....8/10....
3 K.O's but~this ones mine~you've just stepped into a battle field,
ya ~mines blown~could'nt win this battle if you were sittin
Ur drunk...lol...dis ain't even rhyme....2/10

31/60.....bad verse brah...ima account this to bein drunk i guess....



VOTE GOES TO J_TROOP

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Vote-J Troop for harder punches close battle even in about everythign but i liked J's punches better..good battle

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