alright I daughter hoz:
you surprised me with this shit..your flow was alright..but your structure was ugly..you changed the font thaz da only reason it looked decent,....your punches were hittin pretty hard....your vocab was there...but you lacked real good personals...and you would have to bring that up against latin cuz shes like da queen of personals on this site..ur multi's ...saw a few..they were decent....your meta's...i didnt really feel any of em but they was aiight...overall...this was a decent verse i was feelin it...good shit 41/50

LatinkItten: you had the better structure ..it was much easier to read...and your verse flowed alot bettter....ur vocab was there ..it was decent...ur personals were hitting hard like alwayz..thaz where u alwayz take the lead is in personals..good pics....nice shit...ur punches were hittin they were pretty sick........ur multi's u dont really use alot of em but they was a few...ur meta's ur meta's..dont use alot of em either byut they was sick overall: ur shit was sick u beat her on personals flow and structure...good shit 45/50

vote:latin

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