yo, but who is Flash's vote too? he voted for Polifick, yet he gave me more points?

Yes im voting on this...

Spul
You're so ugly, the closest you've been to havin' sex is wit yo lotion
It isn't the poetry, it's yo "skill", that makes you "cum" in slow motion
6/10..played dog.....
Yea, you posted up yo pic, then you said it wasn't tru
We all kno why you posted it, cuz you wished that dude was you
6/10...this didnt hit hard at all, why would he wish that dude was him...
This wigga goes around sayin' "nigga", cuz he really wish he was black
Man, get of the crack, you're wack and a racist, even you kno it's a fact
6/10...no punch
We all kno why you left original, cuz this bitch got hated
Again you prove yo gayness, by havin' the alias, Dick Tated
6.5/10...ok, didnt really make sense kind of...
But I'm not the only one, even Vets agree wit what I say
TripleN4554: LMFAO. I thought apothesis was really gay
7.5/10..ahaha, funny
So you call me overrated, lol, ok, if that's what you wish to flaunt
This RB Queen is jealous... it's my dickriders he really want
5/10..blah...your hurting urself...looks like i wont be battlin u...
But I don't have a single one, cuz to win... I don't need them
You couldn't come in FIRST, if you replaced Adam in Eden
7/10..good punch, couldve used somethin better other than adam and even, but good
We all kno England is fucked, I mean chips are fries, and fries are chips
You prolly like the hot dogs the most, cuz they so skinny, they look like dicks
6.5/10...- points for saying dicks
Oh, you wanna see me brag? I'M NUMBER ONE!!! I hope this helps
I could still merk yo ass... while makin' fun of myself
7/10...ill give u the benefit of the doubt on this one...
You can call me a 'mUmma's boy", but I'll still rip you into pieces
I'll merk yo ass so bad. Now that's a fact, not jus my Thesis
5/10...gay...his name not even Apoth"e"sis..
I can tell by ya pic that you are a severe sufferer of the munchies
Cuz you got enough fat in ya cheeks, to feed 10 thirdworld countries
7/10..ahaahaha
If you get a girl, kissin' you wit their eyes closed is the only way they should
Considerin' yo ugly face... that's the only way they could
7/10...damn, clownin em...
Don't say you from the hood, cuz you ugly, and rap like shit
I beat you, but you got a tie... cuz niggas were ridin' yo dick
5/10...no punch...and gay.
Rip a shit, lick a dick, wit rick a hick a that
Your verse is like the line above... completely WACK!!!
7.5/10...creative...u were gonna get an 0/10..if u aint do something like that...no matter wut the second line was...
Polifick shoves his dick up Apo's ass, cuz it makes Apo feel cushy
Then he shoves it down Apo's mouth, cuz it's the closest he'll get to pussy
4/10...gay...dont ever do something like this again
Both of y'all got here cheaply. A no show, and a dick ride
If I told y'all to kill everyone who hated you, it wouldn't be murder, it'd be genocide
7/10...good closer...
overall - 5.8125...weak verse...u had some highlights...some very lowlights...then some average lines...but i cant say if it was weak for u cuz ive never seen anyof your outher battles...but yea, this was weak.

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Polifick
Can Go All Day How Wack U Are Freak.. But Yo verse Is My Summary...
Punches Are Weak.. Like The Present Muhammad Ali.. Missin Stunningly ...
6/10..played...weak...
Tie Sand Bags Round His Waiste...Still Wouldnt Be Heavy Weight...
Wouldnt Be Off the Chain If He Was Tubman Running On Escape...
7/10..good punch
Must Be Drunk When You Write Verses Flow Is Disorderly....
Worster Than White Chicks..In Scary Flicks...You Die So Horribly..
6/10...gay...
Racist Bitch...In This Battle You Not Goin Beat Blacks...
Reason Poetry In motion..It Goes Down It Gets No feedbacks...
6.5/10...good, but worded bad...
Throws The Pin And Holds The Grenade;Thats How He'll lose the fight...
Poet not Battle write;or use the mic;D/R DeadlyVisons Bruise Your Sight......
Drop The Foolish Hype" Russell Simmons Left.. I Won't Have You 'looking right"...
6.5/10...i liked the second line...third was uneccesary...
Wrap Up Your Mic Cords...Verse Leaves Bored..Godly??You Not Even Lords...
Far From The Best..0 Votes Scored..Your Like A King In Chess..Last-On The-Board..
7/10...nice punch
Bowin 2 Me Like His Ava..T..Ar...If You Was Jack And Tiger 2 Gether Still Wouldnt Par...
Like Monkey Murdering Yo Bars...Can Be Janets Nipple,Still Wouldnt Be A Graduated Star...
5/10...didnt get a damn thing in that whole part
Wins 1 Tourney..Now His D/Riders Sayin He Over-Rated...
Vango puttin Batteries In Yo Back ..The Reason You Mo2Va8ted...
5/10...wack, doesnt make sense
If Rap Was A S.A.T He A Be Like Marion Jones Steeriods Far From Passin.....
D/R LLoyd Banks Instead Of Hunger 4 More Spuls More Of Non Fasteing....
6/10...worded bad...
Nursery Rhymes;I'll Put An End To Your Lines''Like Disconnecting The Phone..
You Spitting Foam;Treat You Like Games In Toronto;Split Open Your Dome..
7/10...haha, nice
Like Getting Sucked Into Airplane Propellers;Ill Have My 'fans' Merk You...
Lost a Hurt u....Sideline Then Get Rid Of You..So Im Garrison Hearst You....
6/10...wasnt feelin it...
Verse Look Like You Typed In A Hury..Win Is A Blury..Lyrics Far From Worthy..
Bitin His Nails Got Him Worried...Lryics Is Fake Just Like His Mike Bibby Jersey..
6/10...i knew this would be used as a personal forum..which makes it weak
Suppose 2 Be Nike Shit Is Reebock..Please Stop..Sending U Away Like Diviac..
Mommis Boy...Eatin Vegatables Like She Say Only Way His Beats Hott..(Beets)
7/10...nice...
Im In The Ship But Who Im facing?I Dont Kno Is It Time Or Rhymes Im waisting..
Cuz This Battle You Like Mugsy Bouges Blazing.. You Wont Rise To The Occasion..
6.5/10...ehhh
Have Him Trippin Again"Kickin The Can" Like Poor Kids Playin Soccer Lately..
Let Yo Mom come Home And See You On The Net..Its Peace...Maybe...
6.5/10..lol, but he said it was played tho...
overall - 5.867...u had an ok verse, but when u attempted to have crazy wordplay, it fucked u up...
any way
1.apo
2.polofick
3.spul
v/apo

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ok, so what we goin' up to? If it's 5 i was leadin' 5-3-1, but I don't kno. So now it's 6-5-1 apo, I guess. uppin'

^^ 105/160 Mines was 100/150 So I Got it By 5 Points....

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oh, my bad. I thought they were all out of 160. Uppin' this. 1-1-1

yo fo real , i got spul , cuz personally like his lines betta , spul got madd flows yall... HOLLA

Your style is shitty bitch & no way is it evolving,
It must suck posting a piece….that ur 2 wack 2 be involved in.
^^ stretched 5/10

Your style is shitty bitch & no way is it evolving,
It must suck posting a piece….that ur 2 wack 2 be involved in.
^^decnet stretched 6/10

^ it flowed perfectly. Just because the txt isnt even doesnt mean shit.

Anyways...decent battle

spul i gave it to poli becuase 100/150 is better then 105/160

so that is why i gave it to him

sorry i stopped reading the battle after i saw a "cum line"
i was highly disappointed
i will be back later to break this thing down *shakes head*

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^haha

SPul verses
Diss to APotheosis: Nice drop, Nice lines. Your punches were very good and so are your personals, most of your punches and personals are good and some were really funny. your punches hit hard and so did your personals. I loved your starting and closings for your verse to Apo'. No multis. Structure was good liked it. Flow was very good. I thought some verses could have been better Re-Wording, only 2 lines though... had little flaws in some parts of the lines. your verse was also good and complex, which makes it more hard hitting and gives you a better chance of winning, you had some good metaphors.
Personals: 8/10
Punches:8.5/10
Structure: 7.2/10
Flow: 7.5/10
Opener: 7.0/10
Closer: 9.6/10
OVerall: 7.9

Verse to polifick
Not as good as you verse to Apo' but i found this rather funny. NIce strong punches. It was good. Your personals umm yea it was ok but you kept talking about how ugly he is. No Multis. they don't even count. Structure again very good stucture there. even your flow is good nice job. you really need some re-wording on this verse... but it was good. Best lines was the first 2 lines
Personals: 6.7/10
Punches: 7.9/10
Structure: 8/10
Flow: 8/10
Opener: 8.9/10
Closer: 7/10
Overall: 7.75/10

Closing lines: rating: 8/10
OVerall verses put together: 7.8/10
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Apothoesis: verse to Polifick
Nice verse, good drop. your punches were good here and your personals were awesome. All heard hitting puches and personals. your verse was funny as well... your links that you posted up there were all funny and good. Flow is good, and so is your structure. nice drop best lines last 2 lines
Personals: 8.1/10
Punches: 7.6/10
Structure: 7.5/10
Flow: 7.5/10
Opener: 7.1/10
Closer: 7.1/10
Overall: 7.4/10

Verse to SPuL
Better drop tha your last, i liked this better than your diss to Polifick. Nice punchess here still... i also like your personals, very nice and dope. Structure was very good and flow was great. favorite line is the first 2 lines. nice punch.
Personals: 8.2/10
Punches: 7.4/10
Structure: 8/10
Flow: 7.7/10
Opener: 8.1/10
Closer: 7.5/10
Overall: 7.8/10

OVerall verse combined: 7.6/10
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Polifick lines: Verse to Apo'

Nice drop nice lines... nice wordplay you have there good vocab... your punches are OK i'd say mid-heavy hitting... you personals where good though flow was good nice job... structutre nice job too... your opener was very good nice punch and closing was good but i didn't like it much...
Personals: 7.4/10
Punches: 8.3/10
Structure: 8/10
Flow: 7.3/10
Opener: 8.1/10
Closer: 7.1/10
Overall: 7.7/10

Verse to SPuL
I loved your verse... nice Dope drop and your lines are good... Nice wordplay and vocab.. nice punches all hitter and very cool personals... your structure was very good here i liked it... your flow was good here too. opening was very good and closing was good to favorite lines is the last 2 lines=DOPE
Personals: 7.7/10
Punches: 8.7/10
Structure: 8/10
Flow: 7.2/10
Opener: 7.5/10
Closer: 8/10
Overall: 7.85/10

Overall verse combined: 7.77/10
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TO all: ALL verse you guys made was DOPE AS FUCK
1st: SPuL
2nd: Polifick
3rd: Apotheosis

this is a close battle so i have to pick SPuL for a better verse
Vote/SPuL

thanks for votin'. 2-1-1 me. Uppin' this dope battle.

^slow down all the dope battle talk man...i cant believe what i saw in this battle
lets start with U Mr "cum line"..


You're so ugly, the closest you've been to havin' sex is wit yo lotion
It isn't the poetry, it's yo "skill", that makes you "cum" in slow motion
never ever, under any circumstances is it ok for anyone to use
a cum line..i cant believe people are sayin this was dope..
i honestly stop reading your verse after reading that..
i was completely dissapointed...i thought this was a heavyweight
championship match and u use a cum line, i am sorry dude
but that is completely unacceptable..as far as i am concerned
u lost the battle right there...please dont argue with me..
thats how i feel..
Yea, you posted up yo pic, then you said it wasn't tru
We all kno why you posted it, cuz you wished that dude was you
weak...didnt do it for me, might be personal, but it was still weak

This wigga goes around sayin' "nigga", cuz he really wish he was black
Man, get of the crack, you're wack and a racist, even you kno it's a fact
wtf...u are diggin yourself n a deeper ditch..that wasnt good man

We all kno why you left original, cuz this bitch got hated
Again you prove yo gayness, by havin' the alias, Dick Tated
another forced personal with horrible wording...blah again

But I'm not the only one, even Vets agree wit what I say
TripleN4554: LMFAO. I thought apothesis was really gay
forcin personals make the verse look bad...didnt like this either

So you call me overrated, lol, ok, if that's what you wish to flaunt
This RB Queen is jealous... it's my dickriders he really want
wording was off here too, and punch didnt land

But I don't have a single one, cuz to win... I don't need them
You couldn't come in FIRST, if you replaced Adam in Eden
weak. nuff said

We all kno England is fucked, I mean chips are fries, and fries are chips
You prolly like the hot dogs the most, cuz they so skinny, they look like dicks
lmao..this really sucked, this is a heavyweight match, throw
a punch for please

Oh, you wanna see me brag? I'M NUMBER ONE!!! I hope this helps
I could still merk yo ass... while makin' fun of myself
how is this a diss, really...its doesnt seem like a punch to me

You can call me a 'mUmma's boy", but I'll still rip you into pieces
I'll merk yo ass so bad. Now that's a fact, not jus my Thesis
C'mon man, thats not a diss...just forcing a words that rhyme
nothing in this portion of your verse gave me the impression you
should be in a heavy weight title match

moving on..

can tell by ya pic that you are a severe sufferer of the munchies
Cuz you got enough fat in ya cheeks, to feed 10 thirdworld countries
ok..this was a little better, coulda been worded different
but i will atleast give u credit for attempting to throw a punch here

If you get a girl, kissin' you wit their eyes closed is the only way they should
Considerin' yo ugly face... that's the only way they could
sucked..wording was horrible...read your setup again,
its so forced its not even funny

Don't say you from the hood, cuz you ugly, and rap like shit
I beat you, but you got a tie... cuz niggas were ridin' yo dick
stop with the D/R lines, they are almost as played as
the cum line, pretty much downhill from here

Rip a shit, lick a dick, wit rick a hick a that
Your verse is like the line above... completely WACK!!!
ok...the setup sucked, i see what you tried to do
but failed...dont do this ever again..


by the way the little comments between your verses
was very cute, it was the best part of your battle..
*Decides to wrap this shit up*

Polifick shoves his dick up Apo's ass, cuz it makes Apo feel cushy
Then he shoves it down Apo's mouth, cuz it's the closest he'll get to pussy
i stopped reading after the word "cushy",
your word selection is horrible...
Both of y'all got here cheaply. A no show, and a dick ride
If I told y'all to kill everyone who hated you, it wouldn't be murder, it'd be genocide
played... i used this concept in like May ....... 2003
and your flow was fucked up cus your lines were too stretched..

ok Spul, before this battle i had never read any of your shit
i expected for you to be among the elite..whereas so far
you wouldnt make it 5 min amongst the elite at original RB...
u gotta a lot of work to do man...
but before u bitch about how i dont get none of your lines..
read them again and please read the comments a left...
i have nothing against you, i just expected more..
but we'll see what the other guys dropped and move on from there..

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