FLOW: IT WAS A PRETTY DRAMATIC PIECE.. I LIKED THE ACTION ANDF ALSO THE PHONE CALL. I LIKED THE VERY BEGINNING ALSO WHERE YOU DESCIBED YOUR SURROUNDINGS.. BUT SOME MISTAKE.. SINCE WHEN DO SNIPERS USE GLOCKS OR PISTOLS.. A HIGH POWER, LONG DISTANCE ASSAULT RIFLE WOULD BE MORE APPROPRIATE FOR A SNIPER, AND WHEN YOU SAID PISTOL, HONESTLY, THAT THREW ME OFF OF THE WHOLE STORY. IT WASN'T REALISTIC ANYMORE..

MANIPULATION.. VERY GOOD DESCTRPTION OF WHAT'S GOING ON.. I LIKED THE FACT THAT I WAS IN THIS GUYS HEAD AND WAS ALMOST STANDING NEXTY TO HIM.. I LIKE HOW HE JUST PICKED HIS VICTIM OFF, AND CALMLY WALKED DOWN THE STAIRS.. WHAT SAVED YOU, IS THE MISTAKE THAT FLOW MADE.. YOU ATLEAST MENSIONED A SCOPE, AND RIFLE.. ALSO THE DESCIPTION WAS IN A LOT OF WAYS BETTER.. SO MY VOTE GOES TO




MANIPULATION.. THIS WAS A LONG BATTLE TO READ AND REPLY TO, CAN YOU PLEASE RETURN THE FAVOR WITH AN HONEST VOTE IN MY BATTLE? THANK U..
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=138974

DON'T TRIP, HE DOESN'T MAKE SENSE^....

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Caliph...i voted on her battle yah...but did i vote for her? no..so is that d/r? no stfu before i murder your bitch ass

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bitch you voted for her on every battle she been in yous a dick rider and a sniper in the military no originality at all the only thing worse wouldve been you as john muhammad.he beat you fair and square he had better originality slut everytime you get voted aganist you post afterwords complaining bitch if you so nice why you aint got a deal? exactly!!!

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AIN'T THAT THE PURPOSE OF THE SITE?

wtf r u rattling on about?............
i never complain wen i get voted against....
but wen sumone comes n drops a hate vote in a tight battle..yeh i will complain..

justify aint d/r me....hes voted in 2 of my battles..once 4 me and once against..
that aint d/r fool.
as or your stupid comments.
a/who the fuck is john mohammed?
b/u hvnt got a place to talk bout my verse cos ur wack.
c/hve u got a deal?..i think not!.
d/all votes in here r from respectable peeps...(apart from u)
jus go away and die.

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Ok Enough Freeposting Uppin For Votes...

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ahh,both good drops,manipulation i liked your verse for the fluent imagry,some lines kinda threw me off like the were worded a bit wierd but your plot was koo..this is hard ta compare these 2 cause you both came with tottally different styles...flow your verse was nice but i was'nt feeling the continues break in the ryme plot when you'd explain the situation"the bold text"...i vote was determined ta who brought the story their life more..flow you had coo comparisons the whole verse threw like refering to the pope,n others...manip,you were brutally consistent in your imagery of topic...this was tough though...im gonna go with manipulation in this cause she expressed more emotion n had a consistent image throughout without explaining the situation or breaking away from a ryme scheme...props ta both mc's..nice job
VOTE/MANIPULATION
please hit my topical up.....
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=139167

holy fuck IE you lit it up you got my vote for everything that was the best ever ive heard

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

o rank i thought he was rapping haha
well flows got it then the other guy had nothin on me

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manip could you return the favour on my topical^^^ since i took the time ta drop a honest vote on this...id appreciate it since your a topical head...pc

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