Voted For: Mc:Xplicit

lol..

ok, wasnt really feelin this.

punches- MC.
werdplay- MC.
flow- MC
Vocab- MC
Vote- MC

lo try to add metafours and witty vocab to strength up your punches.

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uppin in here need one more vote

uppin for some votes

Voted For: Mc:Xplicit



Fuck battlin Im on some real life shit
Duck quick cuz u niggas might get hit
United we stand, United we fall
so step on up if ya got the gall
3/10
campared ta me ya really really........ SMALL
I don't back down fron any kinda fight
doesn't matter the time.....Day or night
casue I put in da WORK ta get the job done
Ive master alot of rhymes... you haven't master one
2/10
Im right here in da East and ya runnin ta da west
jus remember when ya get there ta tell whos the best
send'em all back this way so I can putt'em ta rest
theres noone out there that can complete this test
2/10
so ya might as well jus stay at home ..in da bed
cause if ya keep steppin up ...ya could end up dead
ill be fillin ya up with lead.....form a #2 pencil
best keep dodgein to stay out the stincil
1/10~Dont ever say sumtin like that ever again Kid ~

Punches were ok i guess and ya complexity wasent there ya vocab wasent there main thing u had goin for u was structure so u need 2 improve and elevate before u join another battle
metas werent really there and ya personals were umm pretty much non existent

overall drop 2/10


They say it takes a "village" to raise a kid but they were wrong
Cause I was lyrically raised up but not by " M kinght Shymalon"
niggas like you write about busting nines, and shooting hollow tips
notice I said "write" about so you only shooting out " paper clips"
4/10
I'll make sure I keep this one cat on the low down
with no sound...when the lyrical grand repper come round
1st round knockout dawg I'm a true finisher
stay killing the "1 and 2'z" like "2 consecutive integers"
lodown you the flipped version named "kelly R"
Hopefully "he'll save you" from writing junk and messing with a star
3/10
My new movie killin on the lodown starring me
this dude is gone we need a new pide pipper of RB (rapbattles)
I "blew" your mind with my lyrics cause they stay brutal
got your brains "strung" out just like "Ramen noodles"
5/10

Your punches were ok ya structure was decent and ya complexity was um good i guess u had the overall better drop between wordplay metas and Punches

which gives your overall vote a 5/10

~one xplicit

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