errr.........actually im elevating i got 5-6..and yeah still elevating DUDE............



uppin bitches

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Voted For: MARVOLoUsJ1009

close battle....

xxxtayve - you self glorified yourself way to much in your verse and barely threw any punches really...the flow was kinda off and your lines were stretched at time to time... i dunno you coulda came harder

marvolousj1009 - good battle, nice flow, nice structure, and some good punches... i like the raisin hell, asian males one..good punch.....nice wordplay...good drop over all

v/marvolousj1009

please hit up my battle with an honest vote as i did for your battle
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=141918

uppin lets get dis closed

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This cake is marvolous,matter of fact the way im eating u is gon be hilarious
You got 17 losses by the end of this joke u gon know im fucking serious
6/10
You battleing me is like trynna move a mountain,u never gonna make it,thumbsdown is what u handling
Why aint u got a pic?…scared to be told the thruth u look like a pig?..son take a fucking grip im Xtayve but still X-x-Xtasy
5/10
too many chumps wanna fucking lick my cunt,bitch i aint ur mutherfucking mom, i aint giving u my cum
when i step on the stage everybody drop their mic,today is ur last day,u gon know this aint a dyke
5/10
i rep this nerd like the statue of liberty to new york,ur lyrics slip down my for cos u just a weak dork
Dis ciggarette tips his anal shaped sombero,smoke dis fag and destory like the cape passero
5/10
theere aint no way u winning me,cos u got ur lines robbed with oil..so they slide of cos they greasy
5/10

No hard punches and no wordplay or really any personals ~Elevate some ma


now u a vet? 1st u was beggin sayin pleez put me in a team...
should be lucky i still got dez shells they could be in ya spline..
"6-5" ya record "short" giv it up it u just a rookie w/ a dream..
i saw "xxx" in ya s/n & knew u was just a"pussy on da screen"
6/10

i dont need lead n a rifle,u suck "marv albert" neva a bite u..
& ya "lines be stretched" more than tryouts at "american idol"
6/10

i display's it well,im " hott" dont "pick up a pen" dat a be like "raisin hell"...
u say u blazin dells??..nah all ya lines "look da same" like "asian males"..
6/10
im so sick u might wanna kiss my moms,& da kid drop bombs..
after dis lose u probly wont eva "rap" a "verse" on dis ".com"
6/10

Lacked hard personals and wordplay wa ok ya structure was on point

overall it came down 2 better wordplay ~structure and harder punches

wasent the best battle but it was ok

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