Originally Posted by headgames

Man, this guys always drunk up on booze
Maybe that's why he was so eager to loose
->>nah...
I'm about to go, full, frontall
Make like a mantador and kill this bull
->>doesnt rhyme...decent punch in the second line
Thinks he can beat me, but I grabbed the bull by the horns
I'll be laughin at your funeral, while your familly moarns
->>ehh...decent
You joined a loser crew, it's true, what did you think?
Can't expect much from an mc who named after a drink
->>decent closer

nothing special here...your verse was pretty boring no hate just nothing that popped out at me

Originally Posted by Red Bull

battlin me was your worst mistake you could ever make
for fuck sakes...heres a "game" give your "head" a shake
->>weak opener
this guys gay suckin dicks, cause he aint gettin chicks
has to sit on his comp and get off to big chases booty pics
->>ha first line wasnt that good but second line brought it together
reps cAPiToL PuNIsHmENt at the start, leaves thinkings hes smart
joins cold blooded, and now they are fallin apart
->>didnt hit too hard but it was ok
but whose to blame,come on, just look at his name
it goes with his favourtie hobby...playin "headgames"
->>first line wasnt too good of a setup but it was funny

you had some pretty good punches in here...a little filler too and the opener was weak but I think your verse had what it took to beat him.