RapVerse.com Community
 Phenom | Kingz | Dabatos | TonySelf | Tha Q | Half Breed | Tito | 7th End RV Radio  

Go Back   RapVerse.com Community > The Cage > Battle Archives > Front Lines Battles
User Name
Password
FAQ Calendar Search Today's Posts Mark Forums Read

View Poll Results: Who won this battle?
twizted 5 71.43%
illuson 2 28.57%
Voters: 7. You may not vote on this poll

 
 
Thread Tools Search this Thread Display Modes
Old 09-12-04, 01:30 PM   #1
Ragnarok
...The Four Horsemen...
 
Posts: 108
From: Norse Mythology Hell
IP:

Quote:
Originally Posted by The Kid P-Dizzle
Voted For: illuson

Ok illuson gets my vote because this was a battle, not a topical. But Twizted you got good structure. Illuson you just gotta elevate bro, I can understand you're new here so just practice and you'll get better...
Vote - Illuson

Return the favor, honest votes only:
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=142734



ups for ya ass he gots a good point
 
Old 08-18-04, 07:05 AM   #2
Twizted
New to RB
 
Posts: 67
From: Westcoast
IP:

Uppin Votes
 
Old 08-18-04, 06:51 PM   #3
Twizted
New to RB
 
Posts: 67
From: Westcoast
IP:

Uppin Votes
 
Old 08-20-04, 06:34 PM   #4
Vicious Beast
Banned: Cheating
 
Vicious Beast's Avatar
 
Posts: 113
From: murda capitol a.k.a. DC
IP:

Voted For: Twizted

Sorry dude but Im gon have to give this one to
Twis. his punchlines were just knockin him out even though both were good
His flow was heavenly and
his wordplay just killed him
Very good battle

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.
 
Old 08-21-04, 05:17 AM   #5
Twizted
New to RB
 
Posts: 67
From: Westcoast
IP:

Uppin Votes
 
Old 09-11-04, 12:24 AM   #6
Twizted
New to RB
 
Posts: 67
From: Westcoast
IP:

Uppin Votes
 
Old 09-12-04, 01:29 PM   #7
Ragnarok
...The Four Horsemen...
 
Posts: 108
From: Norse Mythology Hell
This was feedback posted for illuson

IP:

god damn this bitch sucks yo you need real elevating nigguh wat
__________________
War|Pestilence|
Death|Famine|


|Atrocious|
|Corruptive|Depraved|
|Heinous|Malevolent|Sinister|



That's pretty fucking evil to me.....



Apocalypse.... In a different kind of way...
 
Old 09-21-04, 07:47 PM   #8
Epical
..Friends Change..
 
IP:

Voted For: illuson

um ya

punches- luson cuz u had some
personals- luson cuz u had one
multis- neither of yall had em
metas- neither of yall had em
word play- neither of yall had em
flow- Twiz

Luson- weak verse, u need to elevate, punches, personals, basically everythin needs to be elevated

Twiz- aight verse, but u have to throw punches, this isnt a topical, youd be good in topicals.

Luson:
"see my ass ya can kiss it
every rhyme ya do ya bit it" weak punch, best i found

Twizted:
"I saw the shit on the news just the other day,
I ain't for singing no blues, I'ma make 'em pay," i liked it. but try topicals.

v/luson
 
Old 09-21-04, 07:49 PM   #9
HOLLOW_TIPS
Banned: Cheating
 
HOLLOW_TIPS's Avatar
 
Posts: 212
From: LONG BEACH CALIFORNIA GET IT RIGHT NIGGAS QUEENS VILLAGE UP IN HERE THA CITY WHERE THA SKINNY NIGGAS DIE 562 MUHFUCKAS
IP:

Voted For: Twizted

twizted
got this he was harder with his lines and he had better vocab shit nice structure and ha had better verse

illuson
you need to come harder mayn and make ya verse longer
Send a message via AIM to HOLLOW_TIPS Send a message via Yahoo to HOLLOW_TIPS  
Old 09-22-04, 04:45 PM   #10
Twizted
New to RB
 
Posts: 67
From: Westcoast
IP:

Uppin Votes
 
Old 10-15-04, 04:15 PM   #11
Twizted
New to RB
 
Posts: 67
From: Westcoast
Uppin Votes

IP:

Uppin Votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
Old 10-15-04, 04:22 PM   #12
K.ontroverz.Y
I Smacc Booty Emcee's
 
Posts: 9,196
From: Hamilton
IP:

Voted For: Twizted

aiigh ez battle twizted took this..better vision i culd feel it..better vocab..u had better anything no need to explain illuson is 0-14 shoot

twizted return the fav and drop a vote in this battle

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=154947
__________________


K.ontroverz.Y
..Audio King Of Rv..


A.uthentik I.ntelligence
..Forever..

Send a message via AIM to K.ontroverz.Y Send a message via MSN to K.ontroverz.Y  
Old 10-17-04, 06:05 PM   #13
Twizted
New to RB
 
Posts: 67
From: Westcoast
IP:

Uppin Votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
Old 10-18-04, 01:15 AM   #14
Twizted
New to RB
 
Posts: 67
From: Westcoast
IP:

Uppin Votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
Old 10-19-04, 05:29 PM   #15
Infamuz
Banned: Too Dope...
 
Infamuz's Avatar
 
Posts: 477
From: DET, MI
IP:

Voted For: Twizted

you won...........................................

nufff said!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


that nigga should be dq cuz he had to have voted for his self....

think nout it????????????????
__________________


.....Nice sig huh.....
.
.....2 get 1 pm me the details.....
.
.....1 million a -pc-.....


.....My Bank Account # is 35532.....
.
.....If You Owe me money for any reason.....
.
.....Or if you Just Want to Give me Money.....

 
 


Thread Tools Search this Thread
Search this Thread:

Advanced Search
Display Modes

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

vB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is Off
HTML code is Off
Forum Jump



All times are GMT -4. The time now is 01:47 PM.

Powered by vBulletin.
Copyright © 2000-2004 Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.