Voted For: WiNC

Gotta give this vote to WinC because he had better wordplay, and structure. He also had better Punches and Personals. Although you started your flow wack, but you picked it up near the middle to the end.

Lady- Nice flow, Nice punches, some didnt make too much sense, and that's why i couldnt give this one to you. You had poor structure on this one...but you did have a couple personals. And you fell off near the end. elevate on that part

overall: need to start to have a consistent flow(tight from beginning to the end). yall also need to work on structure and try to add more personals, cause that's wut will give it to you.

drop votes on the below battle...I return all HONEST votes....holla

^uppin' 4 some honest explained votes... up this beeotch.. lol

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Voted For: [~*Lady Fiya*~]

Good shit good shit...

I think you got this battle for real nice job you stretched ya bars a little 2 much tho. Some nice wordplay in here.
Now the other dude up there had some nice punchlines but wtf was that Harry Potter shit? c'mon man grow up lol this is rap not Great Britten.... Uhh well i think you got this battle nice job!

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Voted For: [~*Lady Fiya*~]

this was the best battle because it was all down to decent punches and thats exacly what she managed to pull off. She had the better flow aswell. Only bad thing was the structure which wink won on da but everything else was ladys good spit both of ya.

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

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Haa Haaa cant vote cuz baby girl in my crew

but good battle ya~Nice drop 4rm both of u


Rep the Fam Fiyah~~

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uppin this will return all the votes in a min...

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DaTruth29 [~*Lady Fiya*~] shake-spear Trooper Nova

Voted For: [~*Lady Fiya*~]

nice battle,
you took this with wordplay, flow and punches, nice personals too, foreal gurl, harder and stronger disses then winc,i liked your opener, you stayed on with the flow of this throughout ya verse, didnt fall off one bit, your closer was funny as hell, nice job
winc, ya verse was good too, just not as strong as hers man, but overall good job both
vote:lady fya for personals and strong punches

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uppin this shit more explained votes ...

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DaTruth29 [~*Lady Fiya*~] shake-spear Trooper Nova

wow these drops were crazy and they bot females...id be scared to battle these ladies. IF i could vote though id prob go with winc she was just an edge better and like from the start her shit just came straight ill

yea, uppin' this people plz explain ya votes so this shit can close sum time soon, fa real... EXPLAIN ppl, explain, lol
UPPPPPPPPPPPPPPIIINNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN'
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explain dah votes...

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DaTruth29 [~*Lady Fiya*~] shake-spear Trooper Nova

you know if i didnt have to explain it so much id prov vote more often...but I think WINC took this one. (Mind you this is just feedback so dont try to DQ it!!!!!!)

Voted For: [~*Lady Fiya*~]

Ight, coo battle but this is how it goes, play by play style...

Addin’ a loss to yah record sorry bout that honey…
But you smaller then the faces on throwback money…
7/10 - Punch was ok but not good for an opener

You “softer” then the “fabric” aftah I use “snuggles”…
Got you more “tricked” then “magic” preformed on “muggles”…
8/10 - Good punch but the snuggles line wasn't good

You the discredited “Heavens Angel” merkin you like Yahtzee…
Got you more unholy then a “Jew” turned tah “Nazi”…
9/10 Real tight punch and hardhitting

If you “next to my death bed” then you must be homeless…
And when the punches hit yah face you left domeless…
7/10 - You sit it up with a tight beginning, but punch wasn't hard hitting

Like followers tah Buddha my shots praise at yah temples…
Hot shellz to the face leave more then just dimples…
8/10 Really good stable punch

No need to be strategic with yah like we playin chess…
I jump you like checkers keyin punches to tha face that avoid the chest…
7/10 Punch was stretched; to avoid that, try using metaphors to shorten it down

You couldn’t be on top of the “hill” if you were “cypress”…
Should’ve given you a verbal warning, Don’t try this…
7/10 - Once again, set up was good but not hard hitting

You claim Lady Fiya my “river” will dowse yah flame…
For now on you just lady I took the fiya out yah name…
9/10 Really good punch and use of metas

Should’ve “aborted” when you had the chance I took your “right tah choose”…
Like George Bush tah Al Gore in this battle I win and you lose…
6/10 Probably the worst line in your spit, punch was soft

have you shook like when cops follow an excon...
real bitches battle, ladies where aprons...
7/10 Ok closer, lack good punch
total = 85 %


this nigga “misses DaTruth”, lost his manhood wantin’ respect?! (sig)*
annoyin’ reject, nigga u just anotha Bentley tryna fit in every set! lol
9/10 Hahahaha, funny punchline and good opener

iNC addict saw Lloyd “roll dice”, now you mimic his left hand! (jag off)
battle result: his body sparkin’ ashes near empty propane cans!
9/10 Really good punch and use of rhymes with metas

run to his sig, WiNC asking Jadakiss “why” rapping’s not ur gift?!
b4 u was just “GAYE”, now you too quick to kiss to my “grits”?!
7/10 - OK line, punchline but needed to word the opener

real niggas scratch not wink, “sword-fightin” since u were eight! (dick)
rhymes can’t be taken to “heart” if ya drove at mine with “stakes”!
9/10 Unbelievable use of rhymes and metas again

feather-weight?! his ‘ass’ ‘WiNC’ cuz he lets them dicks ‘grasp it’..
beat ya ass n stray jackets, u mo’ crushed than hopeless romantics! lol
8/10 - Good stable spit punch

you fuckin’ wit’ a frantic; Fiya left his grill in sets of chipped teeth..
toss this can-opener back in the drawer, you made ya fans fall asleep! lmao
8/10 Really good punch

while ya plead, Fiya release ya blood from jagged holes n ya temple!
vitals (u) drop pitiful, he claim “beatin” never “crosses” his “mental”->
7/10 Ok punch, just try re-wording it

like “exorcist” u elevatin a “bent spine“, this “cripple” gets propped up! (d/r)
doctor gave him a “sucker” he ‘came out’ limpin’ & a lil’ knocked up! lol
8/10 Hahahahahaha, real funny punch line

ya muscles too loose to stand, ashamed cuz ya location spelled out: FLaws**
rhymes gettin’ lost, ur audience still waitin’ for signals that say “applause”! lmfao
7/10 Ok closer, you already used the audience joke previously, dont try to repeat yourself next time
total = 92 %

Overall, very good spit by both, but you know what to work on...

v - LF

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uppin' to close the hell outta this shit.. thanx good feedback..

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