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| DangerousMyndLunatic |
  
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4 | 44.44% |
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5 | 55.56% |
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09-11-04, 04:30 PM
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Bonecrushing Nigga
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IP: 9275 0703
Voted For: BostonLyricist
both of ya were iight i guess but i gotta give this to BL cos he had better stuuctre, flow punches and perosnals DML this want not ya best verse though ya had good wvocab but ya need ta try harder ya came more garder in other battles so i gotta give this to BL for a better veres
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09-12-04, 08:14 PM
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IP: A621 A1C1
Voted For: DangerousMyndLunatic
Aight nothing too special in this battle,both were nearly above decent. Boston,you had some OK personals and punches in your verse and I feel like you couldve reworded some of the lines because they didnt flow smoothly.Your structure was so-so,but some of your stuff was too basic.Not too too bad of a verse. Dangerousmynd,your verse was a lot shorter and more enjoyable to read although you had some crappy personals and punches in there but your verse was better because your punches hit a lil harder than bostons.If you both worked on your structures you'd be alot better.And also,reword some of your lines,some dont make too much sense (to both of you). Keep elevating and goodwork. V/ Dangerousmynd.
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09-12-04, 09:44 PM
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This was feedback posted for BostonLyricist
IP: 7BE2 A0A1
he think he a killa but we gonna pay him a visit/...put a potato on the barrell so nobody here it/...
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09-14-04, 04:36 PM
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IP: 4C91 174A
Voted For: DangerousMyndLunatic
dan...- punches-4/10 stuture-5/10 overall verse-4.5/10 OVERALL COUNT 13.5/30 boston- puches-7/10 stuture-3/10 overall-5/10 overall count-15/30 winner-bos |
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09-14-04, 05:25 PM
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E-Style, Bitch.
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IP: 24A3 0EF0
Voted For: BostonLyricist
Aiight, Aight.. This Is Too Close To Judge lol.. But I'ma Have To Do It Anyway... ..........Dangerous, Ya Flow Was hella Nice, Ya Structure Lacked n Ya Humourless Punches We're A MAJOR FLAW, But Other Then That, Ya Had Decent Flow, Decent Vocab An Some KickAss Personals, Add Humour To Ya Punches, You'll Find It Gets You ALONG Way, (No Hate, Just Bein Honest) Boston, Ya Flow Was Aight, Failed To Drop The Complex Vocab But Ya Punches n Metas Hit REAL Hard, n Ya Structure Was Decent, So U Got My Vote.. Return The Favor Ya'll.. P E A C E
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