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View Poll Results: Who won this battle?
Proverse 5 55.56%
JPoll 4 44.44%
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Old 08-26-04, 03:25 AM   #1
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Voted For: ProVerse

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=143415
return the vote or on my e-dubz battle in my sig.

ummm... ya'll should prewrite instead of lookin like newbs.

but w/e heres what i saw.

proverse-
one good punch.
arived in RV i april,still words couldn't spring into action

.... the rest of your verse i wasn't feelin at all

jpoll- after readin your verse i thought u'd lose for sure, but anyway heres what i DID like.......... um scratch that i just re read your verse and u dont have a single line to match proverse's one line i liked.

little tip.... dont "straight key your shit", wordplay punches win battles and u can't jus key those u gotta think 'em threw.

this some honest shit, return wit the same honesty please.
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Old 08-26-04, 02:55 PM   #2
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he takes this easily....he has the only strong lines...proverse wasn't very good...and no i dont' it was prewritten because it wasn't good...but anywho...jpoll came really wack for him too...what's with that stretched shit...i guess it was a key...how's pro getting votes...hmm dr's?...i ono anyways jp took on actually having not played punches
 
Old 08-26-04, 03:56 PM   #3
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im gonna have to give this to you...damn that accent line was the end of jpolll good flow ....are you sure that wasnt prewritten....j/k....nah but forreal you brought the het...jpolll just work on the streched lines and expand your vocab....goood battle tho
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Old 08-26-04, 04:00 PM   #4
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Whoooa
give it 2 ProVerse dat shit was ill
kinda got me there wit dat not prewritten
but ill had wordplay ,metas n hard hittin punches
JPoll yo shit was good but not good enuff diss time
shoulda came a lil harder on punches n shit
but overall good battle vote on da battles
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