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RymheReaper 5 83.33%
big_boy 1 16.67%
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Old 09-08-04, 08:48 AM   #16
LEazy
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Voted For: RymheReaper

I liked your verse cause you had abit of a story going on. Close battle..both of you should have showed abit more so the battle could of been judged abit better by me. Your structure wasn't all that great but you got the win. Big Boy was right on dat ass though. Nice battle. Return da favor and peep my battle.

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Old 09-08-04, 08:07 PM   #17
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i have to go with rhyme cause his was more deep and on point yo nice

Yo ma eyes goin red ma life goin dead ma carcuss lays ina-jail-bed
Yo spend all ma money one drugs child support how I-be-fed
// nice mayne paintin an picture believing dat u was there

I be flatlined At banks no money I be denied Try to go to college dey say im a druggy and get declined
Yo wish at a star that I quit but I take a shot and smoke sum pot
Ma body crashes full of suspence tha chances of death are imence life gon waz ma consequence
// aight da last bar was good nice, nice closa

Yo my weed smokin ass started at and AGE//
when all my pops thought my life was gonna FADE//
// its good when u talkin about life on da opener

But now I have this animal living in my MIND//
that tells me that all my drugs is takin up my TIME//
// ok nice u tumble a lil bit (off da topic)

I know my life is gonna END//
But I need to be thrown into the PIN//
// ehhhh not an good closa

so i gots to give dis to rhyme cuz he stayed on point

v-rhyme
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Very fucking Nice man, deep shyt, Ima nominate ya for Best poet.

Uppin this for drastic....10/10.....NICE SHYT MAN keep it up.


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