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MotiF 3 37.50%
Word processor 5 62.50%
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Old 09-13-04, 10:51 PM   #1
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Old 09-14-04, 10:59 AM   #2
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votes?
 
Old 09-17-04, 12:38 PM   #3
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uppin
 
Old 09-17-04, 07:02 PM   #4
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ya'll muthafuckas straight sleepin' on dis shit
 
Old 09-21-04, 06:42 PM   #5
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Old 09-23-04, 12:46 AM   #6
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vote on this battle ya'll i'll return tha favor
 
Old 09-23-04, 07:32 PM   #7
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Old 10-04-04, 10:23 PM   #8
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Voted For: MoTiF

LMAO Motif gets the vote short and sweet... better punches.. better flow and structure... word processer u better elevate before u go up against vets... so like i said motif takes it due to punches flow and structure..
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Old 10-10-04, 10:04 AM   #9
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aight, i think word got this, or tycoon, whatever this crazy kat changed his name too, lol, but yea, better flow to the brain cells, more content in his verse, an each line was right on point, solid drop, u got my vote...

motif ya flow was aight, u prolly should have added more, tycoon bought more to the table an it showed, no hate, just tellin it how i see it
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Old 10-17-04, 01:17 AM   #10
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Voted For: Word processor

tycoon better punches flow and vocab had a better structure and better disses and personals the defeat line was layed though still good though 7/10
motif good opener here rest fell off nice structure vocab and flow rest weak ender wack alot of men would fuck l.k if they was drunk!!lol hahah im so fucking funny still punches were not really there verse was too short a 5/10
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Old 10-17-04, 01:32 AM   #11
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Holy shit.. This was wack.. Ive seen Motif drop way better then this before.. whatever though.. heres my breakdown..

Motif
structure is good.. flow is on target.. no multis.. wordplay is decent.. a few, at best, of ur punches connected.. the bill gates one, and the lk with men were ur best.. no good personals..

Tycoon
structure is decent.. sometimes i didnt follow what u were doin.. flow fell off a little due to the inconsistency in the structure.. u had a few multis.. u attempted wordplay, but either it turned out played or just wack.. none of ur punches connected.. u hardly had any punches in the first place, and out of the ones u did have, only a few, and thats being generous, connected.. no good personals..

Overall
Tycoon had more multis.. neither had good personals.. Motif had the better structure.. the more stable flow.. better wordplay.. and more connecting punches.. so basing off of that.. Motif gets my vote..

VOTE - MOTIF
 
Old 10-17-04, 02:20 AM   #12
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Old 10-21-04, 04:59 AM   #13
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Look, this was easy as fuck. MotiF, a lot of your lines were really short.. Too short to flow even.. You were seriously lacking in good punchlines.. Disses were very... eh... And your closer was an attempt at a joke.. But it was sort of played..

Tycoon, your shit wasnt the best, but I saw you had actual punches in there, it kinda flowed better then motif's but your structure was fucked.. Also that style switch thing was pretty gay.. If your gonna do that, theres no need to announce it.. Like when a guy is on a mic in a battle you dont hear him goin "Yo, style switch, Im now gonna do 4 line bars".. Know what I mean?

Anyway, Im just voting on this because its been open for way to long.. But my vote definatly has to go to Tycoon. No doubt.

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