Ok i like this one but as far as rhyming went........... you need to step up ya game! I see ya message clear and not knockin you but again Jada already confronted most of the issues in the world today w/ "Why" feat Anthony Hamilton but on the real fo real rap what you feel in ya heart and what you know. I know you a soulful dude i can tell from ya style but keep doing ya thing and say no more if you know what i'm sayin! Hip hop comin across seas isn't that strong i know that for a fact but, what you need to do is make them listen. If you address yaself straight up maybe they will listen and hip hop can make a establish new ground overseas.