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5 | 71.43% |
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2 | 28.57% |
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09-12-04, 07:23 PM
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This was feedback posted for e-dubz
IP: 95FF 1D86
Cant vote on this cause i know yvonne will probably dq my vote wich is gay but my vote would goto e-dubz yvonne your verse didnt flow whatsoever your word play was weak and the entire verse didnt really make sense structure needs alot of work. e-dubz flow was alright alot better than the yvonne's wordplay was tight yvonne had you on number of punches but your few hit harder and flowed way better although your closer was kinda weak and yvonne's was sick you still won this battle in my opinion.
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09-13-04, 07:19 AM
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Banned: Biting
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IP: 2C69 8F6D
uppin..dont sleep
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09-13-04, 12:56 PM
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IP: 9F22 9711
who the hell is that guy????????????????..........i dont even know him ........wdf...o well
peeps holla at this muh fucker.....holla
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09-13-04, 12:59 PM
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E-Style, Bitch.
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IP: 24A3 0EF0
Voted For: Yvonne
yvonne wins this cos she had harder punches which were absolutely direct...structure was a lil wack but i was feeling her style for the personals...both had a gd verse tho..but yvonne gets this...
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09-13-04, 06:18 PM
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Banned: Biting
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IP: 2C69 8F6D
uppin...
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09-13-04, 08:09 PM
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IP: 7DC8 13A6
Voted For: e-dubz
E-DUBZ MERKED YVONNE IN THIS BATTLE..HARDER PUNCHES NICE STRUCTURE THA VERSE WAS IIGHT HAVE HARDER DISSES ... YVONNE YA FLOW WAS KOO 2 I JUSS THINK E CAME HARDER NO HATE |
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09-14-04, 12:54 PM
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Banned: Biting
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IP: 2C69 8F6D
uppin...
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09-14-04, 12:56 PM
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This was feedback posted for e-dubz
IP: CCAE A7E8
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=149538
.. vote here... ive seen better from both of u......
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09-14-04, 06:53 PM
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Banned: Biting
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IP: 2C69 8F6D
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09-15-04, 03:41 AM
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IP: 9E2F CDE8
Voted For: e-dubz
Opener - Dubz, Yvonne tried too hard to use multies Closer - Dubz, Loved that shit dawg, Yvonne's was a weaker punch Punches - Yvonne, Dubz didnt have as many Personals - Yvonne, for use of Dubz name in his verse Multies - Tie, althought Dubz opener was dope, you both used'em Metas - Yvonne, had more than Dubz Structure - Dubz, Yvonne's wasn't as clean Vocab - Tie, both were satisfactory Flow - Dubz, Yvonne's bars were longer and hat commas in strange places which threw off the flow No hate boys, both verses were tight, I just wanna say props to both but there has gotta be one winner. As you can tell from my statistics above ^^^ E-Dubz is our winner here today in my honest opinion. Yvonne - Work on flow, structure, and vocab. Dubz - Work on Punches/Personals, and harder metas. Great Job. |
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