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Street Poet | 4 | 44.44% | |
20 GraND | 5 | 55.56% | |
Voters: 9. You may not vote on this poll |
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09-14-04, 11:46 AM | #16 |
20/20 VisioN
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IP: DD90 03FE
UppN
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da916_nigga: ima slap it right now
kidcard7692: cock-a-doodle niggaz da916_nigga: I hate whites, blacks, and mexicans...but I love my greens kidcard7692: Niggas dont eat sprinkles kidcard7692: i just fell going up the stairs |
09-14-04, 09:51 PM | #17 |
20/20 VisioN
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IP: 344B 42FF
Uppn
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da916_nigga: ima slap it right now
kidcard7692: cock-a-doodle niggaz da916_nigga: I hate whites, blacks, and mexicans...but I love my greens kidcard7692: Niggas dont eat sprinkles kidcard7692: i just fell going up the stairs |
09-14-04, 10:15 PM | #18 |
Banned: Biting
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IP: 0825 899A
Aight Yall Need To Vote On Dis Battle
Yo 109 Peepz View Dis Thread And No One Battle Come On Yo Vote |
09-14-04, 10:16 PM | #19 |
Banned: Biting
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IP: 0825 899A
I Mean No One Votes
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09-15-04, 10:02 PM | #20 |
20/20 VisioN
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IP: 6700 9379
VOTE or DIE ppl...
lol COME ON
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da916_nigga: ima slap it right now
kidcard7692: cock-a-doodle niggaz da916_nigga: I hate whites, blacks, and mexicans...but I love my greens kidcard7692: Niggas dont eat sprinkles kidcard7692: i just fell going up the stairs |
09-16-04, 01:31 PM | #21 |
leave you rest'n pz's
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IP: 72F7 99F5
Voted For: Street poet
I got arrows that will hit you in different directions// Artillary shed smaller than your N Sync poster collection// ^^no punch but good flow The last thing ull hear is the fuckn trigger click// Ironic.. uve been beatin in the day with a night stick// ^^this was koo Ill take an egg beater and shove it into your chest// Then youll know the true meaning of beatn to death// ^^nice..lol This aint a battle its and abortion, cuz im killing this kid// Your lame ass rhymes you need to "get-rid"// ^^flow fell off This freestyle is soo good, it should be made into a song// You wish u were a "vet", so you could take care of ur mom// (^^^ooooOOOOoo^^^) ^^ok,but keep on topic its a battle between you n him not his mom...lol... Yall Katz Iz Garbage Ya Level is Way Belo Mine Ur Wacknes Is Undefined- Spit Dat Sizzlin' Shit.. Hotter then da Devil N the Sun Combined- ^^nice flow but no hard punch.. Kids Gettin Raped Quick Like Michael Jackson at a 7 year olds BurfDay- Droppin Missiles Spit Big Lines..Look Like Fuckin Eearthquakes- ^^??.good flow but did'nt really make sense?? Get Tackled And "Caught On Ya Own Side" LIke A Touchback- U Rushin In My Yard like dat meat comercial U Quick To Get Rushed Back- ^^iffy rhymin/back n back?.shouldnt rhyme the same word. Playin Against Da Kid You'll Get Shook Quick Like Dem And 1 Niggaz- Typa Ma fucka To GetUp In Ya Grill Slap U An Ask You Now What Nigga!? ^^ok.same as the line before.. Mayn You Wack Ya Raps Are Real Dirty Like A Gas Station Basket- Im Like VampiresYou Cant Kil me I jus Keep Resurectin From My Cascatte- ^^ok Click Of A Button n Ull Get Shut Down Nigga cheerin like I gota Tuchdown- *POP POP* What Now!?! Kids in jail gettin raped up the butt now-hha its like dat ^^ok closer aight this was an ok battle but you both lacked in hard hitting punches n should work on that,both had good flow but 20 grand yours fell off at points,overall pretty close...but i gave it to street poet...for a couple slightly better punches n content in verse.
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts what the fuck, was you high..? did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...! . . fake fucks..move on...! |
09-16-04, 09:26 PM | #22 |
..Friends Change..
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This was feedback posted for Street poet
IP: DF04 7502
so poets can rap
punches- street personals- neither multis- street multas- street flow- street word play- street Street nice drop. flow wuz on, punches hit hard, but no personals. 20 not bad verse just not as good as streets. just keep elevatin. also keep the flow goin, u fell off a few times. Street: ''Yall Katz Iz Garbage Ya Level is Way Belo Mine Ur Wacknes Is Undefined- Spit Dat Sizzlin' Shit.. Hotter then da Devil N the Sun Combined-" nice punch. keep em comin 20: "I got arrows that will hit you in different directions// Artillary shed smaller than your N Sync poster collection//" funny and decent punch. v/street if i could vote |
09-18-04, 01:24 AM | #23 | |
Puttin MD On The Map
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IP: 408D D2A2
Voted For: Street poet
yo post got this you had beter punches and better flow 8/10 on punches and flow nice word useage i liked it all you kept it real and didnt need to battle this rookie newb grand- work on your word useage the rhymes were all typical and played out think of shit dont just type what first comes to mouth aight dawg work on you structure and punces over all 3/10 no hate tho man i realize ur just learnin so its understandable just try to pick some other newbs ya know ones you can handle....sike na you lear when you get on good ppl but then they shit on your text so just get newb's till you work on ur shit
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09-18-04, 01:26 AM | #24 | |
Puttin MD On The Map
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IP: 408D D2A2
i meant poet not post my bad man
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09-18-04, 01:28 AM | #25 | |
Puttin MD On The Map
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IP: 408D D2A2
oppps my bad grand u not a newb i glanced at the adio record and i thought it was ur text but i still meant all i posted
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09-18-04, 12:25 PM | #26 |
Banned: Biting
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IP: 28AD 5545
yo uppin uppin mayne uppin peepz vote or die damn it~!
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09-20-04, 10:23 PM | #27 |
20/20 VisioN
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IP: 3125 4889
UPPN, as P.Diddy would say
VOTE or DIE
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da916_nigga: ima slap it right now
kidcard7692: cock-a-doodle niggaz da916_nigga: I hate whites, blacks, and mexicans...but I love my greens kidcard7692: Niggas dont eat sprinkles kidcard7692: i just fell going up the stairs |
09-20-04, 10:28 PM | #28 | |
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 5043 32F4
Voted For: 20 GraND
not the best ive seen from 20 grand but he came a little harder then street poet and street poet im aloud to vote like this so dont get mad and im voting honest man so ya 20 grand you had some wordplay not realy to much but this is what i found out in this battle check it out: punches: 20 vocab: 20 wordplay: poet metas: 20 multi's: poet stucture: poet flow: 20 opener: 20 closener: 20 basically 20 took this one heres my vote and its for 20 grand return soem feedback in my open mic Pure Pressure thanks Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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09-22-04, 03:26 PM | #29 |
20/20 VisioN
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IP: 4C4D 191B
UppNNNN
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da916_nigga: ima slap it right now
kidcard7692: cock-a-doodle niggaz da916_nigga: I hate whites, blacks, and mexicans...but I love my greens kidcard7692: Niggas dont eat sprinkles kidcard7692: i just fell going up the stairs |
09-22-04, 04:14 PM | #30 | |
Flyweight
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IP: 85B8 5CBF
Voted For: 20 GraND
YOU GOT THIS ONE BECAUSE YOU HAD BETTER PUNCHES & PERSONALS V/T 20 Grand
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