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Originally Posted by Indeph Lyricalsolja you illy on the sickness tip.

Voted For: Street poet

yo this vote goes to poet cuz he had all of everything cept for what he laced on you had rhyme punches and structure but metas were a lil weak
solja- man you had some weak shit...wanst good at all no punches hit....you kept talking bout posts and his sig you gotta hit him where it hurts not miss throw better punches ans work on structure worplay and rhymes was too easy kinda predictable and was off topic a lot you got work on stuff man
no hatin tho man just stating the truth but poet this battle went threw the roof
uppin man return the favor either of you

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aight peepz yo uppin for more votes

uppin in dis shit

Voted For: Street poet

now you know me and street are on bad terms but street fucked this fool up with every catogery posible but vocaly and i bet he still would do that if it was an audio battle

Voted For: Lyriclesolja

Man, this one wasnt hard to decided a winner either. Street poet, you went over the 10 line maximum with 12 lines so I would automatically not vote for you...but putting that aside, I will still critique you both and see how you did minus the whole DQ thing...

Opener - Solja, poet's was a very weak punch
Closer - Solja, poet's didnt make any sense
Punches - Solja, for actually throwing punches that were understandable
Personals - Solja, first 5 lines were hard personal hits
Metas - Poet, had more than Solja
Multies - Neither had anything good
Structure - Solja, poets was WACK
Vocab - Poet, Solja's was quite basic
Wordplay - Poet, better wordplay than Solja's

Poet, see, even ho you should be DQ'ed, you still didnt win, That structure was just fucked right up, lines all over the place and caps left and right, clean it up a bit dawg, plus a few of your lines didn't rhyme which also came back to kick you in the ass...Falcons/shoutin, and the last 4-5 lines I couln't even find half of the rhymer words for them...too confusing to read, you gotta elevate boy...

The win here goes to Lyriclesolja without a doubt in my mind...

Please drop an honest vote/feedback on my battle as I have done for the both of you... http://community.rapverse.com/showb...249#post1599249
Thanks, peace......

Voted For: Street poet

open street
close street
punches street
enjoy street
the best is street
he gets my vote

his punches hit alot harder like the first line and he took all cata gories

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.....Nice sig huh.....
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.....2 get 1 pm me the details.....
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.....1 million a -pc-.....

.....My Bank Account # is 35532.....
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.....If You Owe me money for any reason.....
.
.....Or if you Just Want to Give me Money.....

Voted For: Street poet

Punches: sp came harder
personals: none
multis:none
metas: sp

vote: street poet

just was over all better



please return honest vote\/=\/

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