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BANG, ya couldn’t kill with words if you shot one, ya punches are wack son,
Time ya rented some, kid id be rippin n dissin ya friends to but ya got none,

^^^ hahaha Ill

I maime this tyke wit soap, like I cleaned his throat, laughed at his no-votes,
claim you write dope?, even if I was 40/20,I still could’nt see ya wit a micro-scope
^^ Ill


ok ok ok .... this is a one sided battle yo

Daz i felt your flow and you had good humour! nice mettas and multies... all around it was a good spit....
bang... you were outclassed a bit, but youre not whack.... you need to home your skills a bit and get some more battles under your belt.... but you lost this one.....

vote Daz.... keep it real

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Opener - Daz, shit son that was hard!
Closer - Daz, bang rhymed bitch with bitch...
Punches - Daz, Bangs were so weak...
Personals - Daz, cant even say bang threw one...
Metas - Bang, weak taco line...just cause Daz had none...
Multies - Daz...words,birds,terds,nerds...+Bang had none...
Structure - Daz, bangs was wack, Daz was organized...
Vocab - Daz, Bangs was elementary, or should I say pre-skool...

Overall: Bang= 1.5/10 (bein generous)
Daz= 5/10

Daz was throwin hard punches and his vocab/structuring was excellent. Although his verse would have won with only the first 2 lines if he knew that his opponent was gunna drop so weakly. Bang...Elevate everything dawg, go vote on ppl's battles to see where you went wrong cause I dont even know whwere to being. No hate boys, just an honest vote in my opinion. Peace...

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bang- no punches man. thats what this is all about. i see that you WANTED to flow with that but it was streched anyways and there was only really one true bar that actually rhymed. you gotta keep elevatin and try a different style....3/10

daz- lmao! man the punches was funny as fuck. but what i do gotta say is that your flow needs a lil work cuz it really didnt flow that well. like try rappin it to a beat and you will see what i mean. other than that just keep doin yo thing and elevate on vocab and complexity a lil......7/10

v//daz

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