weak battle

punches- solja
personals- solja
multis- eve
metas- eve
word play- eve
flow- solja

Solja ok verse. work on your vocab and harder punches. work on the structure cuz lotta people judge on that.

Eve way to elementary. punchers were weak, u had multis, and better metas but thats it. one word: elevate

Solja:
"Yo your styles like a mold and im the disinfectant,
i saw that battle between you and young buck you got neglected," good personal.

Eve:
"solja you still suck on my worst day i could shove scrable pieces up ya ass and u still couldn't fuck with my word play//" good idea, bad wordin.

v/solja if i could vote

Voted For: eveO

breakdown

punches: L
personals: none <---- hate battles without personals
flow: eve
mettas: tie
multies: eve (kinda)


vote.......


lya face will get smashed ya ribs will get cracked thats all the shit i did with a bat and i will stay sonning solja like fathers with kids in Iraq//

^^ best line in both spits

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Voted For: Lyriclesolja

aight both lacked personals n GOOD wordplay i gotta give it to solja though cause he had structured punches(weak but they were there)the other verse was in desperate need of some structure nbetter flow ..work on that n you'll deffinately get some wqins but your verse lacked in this battle...
return the favour..
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!

yall on some shit what kinda shit is this and yall said i was elementary due raps with one word at the end of his rhyme wut kinda shit is this yall still on some dick ryden shit lyrical stop PMing niggas to vote for u

Voted For: Lyriclesolja

Aiiight

lyricle took this...

eveO, ya flow was aight, i liked the kids in iraq line, the choll line wasnt too much, u could have used better wordplay, but not a bad drop, just keep elevatin (no hate)

lyricle, i cqan see ya gettin better at every battle u have..
this was one of ya stronger battles, nice vocab n flow, punches didnt really hit, but ya personals n vocab have got u the vote

return the favor

p e a c e

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fuck naw iight i want every one that voted to break down were he was better then me in cause yall dickryde to much

im not you cant take the fact that you gonna lose....i havent pm'd any body for votes...and the mods know it....so exept the loss i dont cheat EVER.....so take it like a man fuckin pussy.........Uppin..

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Originally Posted by Indeph Lyricalsolja you illy on the sickness tip.

Voted For: eveO


Yo your styles like a mold and im the disinfectant,
i saw that battle between you and young buck you got neglected,
^^^^^^^^^^^ personals and punches finally newbies gettin da picture of personals and punches

you slow ass is a yeast infection,
and im the monistat one,
your soft like Linda Ronstat wit a gun,
you like Vanilla Ice's son,
if he actually had one,
^^^^^^^^^ nice flow but no punches were throwin on dat part

You had alot of time to prewrite check the bitch slap,
after all that time you had to write you still gonna sound like crap,
you a newbie at this shit start to take a note,
that wack battle you did gave me more hope,
^^^^^^^^^ personal and a punch nice mayne keep at it homie

you should have choked and left this battle alone,
now your gonna get ko'd sittin at your comp. at home.
^^^^^^^^^ weak asssss closa keep elevating homie

solja you still suck on my worst day i could shove scrable pieces up ya ass and u still couldn't fuck with my word play//
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ooooooooooooo what punch nice opener

you can't write rhymes go rock and roll try stop the flow cause i stay on top of soul{sol} like Dr.Scholl's//
^^^^^^^^^^ nice punch homie keep it up

ya face will get smashed ya ribs will get cracked thats all the shit i did with a bat and i will stay sonning solja like fathers with kids in Iraq//
^^^^^^^^^^^ punch nice

face it ya wack at will i'll stomp ya you suck so much if u gave head for land your brian{intelligence} still whouldn't conquer//
^^^^^^^^^^ o aight nice closa mayne


i gots to give dis to eveo got cuz of da hardcer punches mayne

solja mayne u kept hitting dem personals and dem punches but at da middle u stumble a lil bit but u pick yo self up at da end but da closa was wack~!

but solja keep elevating on dem personals and dem punches it will get u somewhere aight mayne keep it up

v-eveo cause of punches (harder)

Uppin..

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Originally Posted by Indeph Lyricalsolja you illy on the sickness tip.

Voted For: eveO

Opener - Eveo, Sols was a weaker punch attempt
Closer - Neither, both were weak
Punches - Eveo, Sols weren't as hard
Personals - Sol, Eveo didnt use any
Metas - Neither, both were weak
Multies - Neither used them
Structure - eveo, sols was wack (short/long lines)
Vocab - Sol, better vocab than eveo
Flow - eveo, Sols was kinda sloppy

Overall it was somewhat close but Eveo came out to win this one today and it shows above ^^^. Props to both, no hate, just an honest vote guys, peace...

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Thank for very much.

Voted For: eveO

EVE0 won but fix ya damn structure ya
lines was stretched 2 def wordplay was good
had hittin punches and they were original so
nice verse


Solja
keep workin on wordplay n punches ya disses was
koo but i won't help wit out wordplay vocab metas
n punches so ya verse was basic still alrite dough

vote honestly on da battles in my sig i voted on ya battle

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OPEN BATTLES
WORDPLAYA VS Word-Scape

Uppin.............yo i should be winnin this shit what the fuck yall talkin bout i pretty much won this hands down....but what eva

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Originally Posted by Indeph Lyricalsolja you illy on the sickness tip.

Uppin..

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