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Old 09-30-04, 11:22 AM   #16
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uppin for more........
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Old 09-30-04, 03:18 PM   #17
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once more, h to the oes
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Old 10-01-04, 01:53 PM   #18
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Old 10-05-04, 06:57 PM   #19
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you mother fuckers.

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Old 10-05-04, 07:06 PM   #20
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its pretty good fo a first topical. Some flow should be fixed up but its not that bad.
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Old 10-05-04, 10:10 PM   #21
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a very good peice.. finnaly i see a peice from you... very good shit.. nice imagret... match iight with the title some wasnt that god though but some lines wer reall dope nice and it would be good as a topical

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Old 10-06-04, 07:23 PM   #22
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Old 10-08-04, 01:46 PM   #23
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Old 10-08-04, 02:11 PM   #24
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dope for the lenght yo.,good imagery n feelin in this piece..
....should collab fam< ill get at ya bout it
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Old 10-13-04, 11:34 PM   #25
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must be a joke, shit has over 100 views but only 24 replies, which most of are mine.

namsayin, Feed would be appreciated.
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Old 10-18-04, 03:10 PM   #26
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once more.

and again
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Old 10-18-04, 03:14 PM   #27
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Some lines need a extra syllablles to fix flow............
but ova all nice drop
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Old 10-19-04, 09:19 PM   #28
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Thanks man.

Reppin UK.
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Old 10-23-04, 09:23 PM   #29
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*stretches arms*

wow this is sstill here??

I hat the open mic forum, we need a coffee shop to attract all the young kids these days........
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Old 10-27-04, 06:40 PM   #30
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^lol...Good drop. Nice use of vocab, nice imagery, i was feelin it although as a couple people said ya flow was off in some places. Overall i nice drop.
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