Voted For: Quick Witted

Scenario - good drop, structures good, and has a good flow to it. persoals and punches were also solid. you had a solid opener and a good closer..good vocab through-out
8/10

Logikal"Lyrickz - you had a good verse, and you had good punches and personals but the structure is way off, like it flows, but you really gotta work on your structure...

6.5/10

v/Scenario came a bit harder and had better structure

Voted For: Logikal"Lyrickz

aight both yer off on the rymhe'n styles
logical gets this cause he was slighty better with everything flow,structure,e.t.c
nice ideas though in both of ur spits

uppin for this contest

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Voted For: Quick Witted

Ayo ima damage dis bitch and make it hereditary/I got off wid his sister,his mom and her secretary/
Coz ill excavate into ya arterie/Rip all ya genes and anomoles/
You a minor and im collosal-Fuck killin ya ill reduce u to a fossil/
See,im a lyrical assasin/Me and u aint even clashin/U cant live up to my lyrical fashion/
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT NICE SHIT MAYNE U GOOD OPENER AND PUNCHES WAS THROWIN


Nigga dis is my bloodsport/Wont let ya breathe le only givin ya a thought/Im a poacher ur in my jungle/Coz Bitch when u challenge me get ready 2 Rumble
^^^^^^^^^^ OK GOOD CLOSA AND GOOD VERSE U HAD PUNCHES AND MULIT'Z AND

ya lyrickz come weak~ain't nothing in ya verse that's remotely logical *
u adopt ya rhymes~while mine beat u like a father who's not biological

u ain't known kid, u heading for no.3~so go back to hiding in the shadows **
gay marriage supporter, dildo?, vibrator?, dick?~u've probably had those

no talent, style is unknown~like vegetables trying olympic swim events
u come 'cold'~faggot probably done blown on more niggas then 'ac vents'
^^^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT MAYNE U HAD PERSONALS AND PUNCHES



kid couldn't come fresh~if he was a 'leprichan' showering with 'irish' spring
u never get any props~can't handle rap go get tickets and watch prince sing

u the next victim on my list to get merked~won't show mercy cause ya new to rb ***
go get 'ken' and ya lil car~get beat turn into a bitch with blone hair like 'barbie'

^^^^^^^^^ OK GOOD CLOSA U HAD GOOD PUNCHES AND PERSONALS

YO I GOTS TO GIVE DIS YO QUICK CAUSE HE CAME HARD WITH DEM PERSONALS AND PUNCHES

LOGIKAL KEEP DOING YO THANG U HAD PUNCHES AND FLOW
BUT USE PERSONALS U CAN WIN BATTLES LIKE THAT


MY VOTES GOES TO QUICK CAUSE OF HARDER PUNCHES AND PERSONALS

~PEACE~

uppin for this shit

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uppin for this, i'll return the honest votes

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uppin for this, i'll return the honest votes

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uppin for this, i'll return the honest vote

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uppin for this people, come on vote

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uppin for more votes, let's get this closed people

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uppin for this, it's been up forever, let's get some votes

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