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Old 09-20-04, 09:07 PM   #16
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word, thanks for all the feedback peeps.
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Old 09-21-04, 05:37 AM   #17
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Uppin for more feedback.
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Old 09-21-04, 08:11 AM   #18
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Some real shit there dawg...very hott topical/battle/Open Mic u put there...for a laugh i read this wit the Super Mario Beat (50 Cent) and despite i had to spit fast...it flowed really well structure also was decent...the wordplay blew me away some real hott rhyming u put out there P...u prolly one of the best topical battlers out there at the mo...don't slip
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Old 09-21-04, 11:02 AM   #19
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Word, Thanks bro. Uppin for more feedback peeps..
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Old 09-22-04, 11:13 AM   #20
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Word, Thanks bro. Prolly woulda made for a good topical.
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Old 09-22-04, 11:18 AM   #21
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foreal, this drop was very well put together and set up perfectly, very vivid and emotional, and had great flow, nice vocab and imagery in your words as well, dope




Couldnt have said it better myself

this was dope poet

I think plan b was killa

keep droppin the hontess mayne

Check out my peice below
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Old 09-22-04, 11:26 AM   #22
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feelin this. 9/10
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Old 09-23-04, 12:57 AM   #23
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i could say that this was dope but to say that would be a waste of time coz we all know this rhyme was hot. so fuck....Poet for being better then me.
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Old 09-25-04, 02:57 PM   #24
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Dopesness just very goosd it was a dope verse overall dope lines and dope poem.... it was good ya ad great strucutre and it flowed very well i could feel what ya meant in ya verse it was very good and the imagery was good

overall 9.7/10
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