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09-20-04, 06:41 PM
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dope piece man...i thought i told you to tell me when you were done? oh well...very dope piece...i liked "final moments of freeddom" this was put together nicely....the only thing i have to say is i would divided the lies, and reality...into different color font..or shape or somethin..i had to read it twice to REALLY follow along..maybe thats just me though..anyways...i'm not into the whole rating thing..so i'll just say i like it a lot..lol
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09-20-04, 09:07 PM
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Bangs like bikini attol
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word, thanks for all the feedback peeps.
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09-21-04, 05:37 AM
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Bangs like bikini attol
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Uppin for more feedback.
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09-21-04, 08:11 AM
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Some real shit there dawg...very hott topical/battle/Open Mic u put there...for a laugh i read this wit the Super Mario Beat (50 Cent) and despite i had to spit fast...it flowed really well structure also was decent...the wordplay blew me away some real hott rhyming u put out there P...u prolly one of the best topical battlers out there at the mo...don't slip
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09-21-04, 11:02 AM
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Bangs like bikini attol
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IP:
Word, Thanks bro. Uppin for more feedback peeps..
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09-22-04, 11:13 AM
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Bangs like bikini attol
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Word, Thanks bro. Prolly woulda made for a good topical.
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09-22-04, 11:26 AM
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New to RB
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feelin this. 9/10
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09-23-04, 12:57 AM
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Better than you..
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IP:
i could say that this was dope but to say that would be a waste of time coz we all know this rhyme was hot. so fuck....Poet for being better then me.
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09-25-04, 02:57 PM
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Bonecrushing Nigga
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Dopesness just very goosd it was a dope verse overall dope lines and dope poem.... it was good ya ad great strucutre and it flowed very well i could feel what ya meant in ya verse it was very good and the imagery was good
overall 9.7/10
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