Voted For: Red Bull

ok lyrical that flow was ok a little but ok verse was good wordplay and vocab punches were weak though and disses aint really hit and that pink shit been used to death already and you aint word it good a ok verse but you need to elevate and drop better punches and whats big briother?who is francis?anyways a 4/10
red ok opener personal that was a gansta cardpull but it couldve been worded better good second bar punch that was good the ejacaluation bar was ok good flow and wordplay on the ender flow was consitent here as well as vocab punches were not great but better then lyricals by far and disses were ok as well a ok overall verse but punches that were better and a nicer to follow flow won you this a 6/10

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damn, its cuz I forgot to post the explanations in my verse fuck, blah Big Brother, you dont now it cuz its a show people dont watch, wich would explain why you dont know it, and Francis, steve francis is a basketball player, damn, oh well, if red wins sall good n e ways, like some people I dont make a big deal of it, aight uppin this shit

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Voted For: Red Bull

ha ha this nigga got my vote he came harder personals and his structure was decent he had good punches nice vocab

madness
you was aiight but you could do better

uppin this shit, come on...to much shit gets slept on here fuckkk

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Voted For: Red Bull

Bull got this...
more complex rhyme scheme, few nice hitin punches redbull, decent wordplay too, u came alot harder than ya oppenent...
nice drop.....

madness, ya flow was way too basic, i'm sure u can do alot better, no hate or nuthin, just step ya vocab n pinches up, ya rhymes were too predicatable

return the fave ya'll

p e a c e

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Voted For: Red Bull

lyrical madness, the bitch formally known as headgames
got KO'ed by me before so decided to change names
Liked this pretty dope. i checd into it

now watch who you're dissin, why choose me for recognition?
if this was tha special olympics you couldn't put up competition
Descenet played bt still funny

your records 0-1, this is just a re-run, still won't end in celebration
because the only sensation you can get is your dads ejaculation
AGin this was pretty funny and could have been said better

this win wasn't hard, "mad" couldn't keep up to par
with just one bar i've left him more empty then his avitar
This was pretty cool as well liked the punch in it

My punches hit hard, leave you bloody and dead.
Sure your rockin pink now but youll be rockin red.
didnt like at all

Got that rec battlin rooks, but I aint no average noob.
I've seen peeps like you, but only inside a test tube.
started off ok and ended wack

It's like Wagner and Francis, we dont compare to eachother.
You beating me is like people actually watching Big Brother.
This was pretty funny

My flow will bust yo ass, youll be goin to footlocker to buy a new 'cap'.
Homeless get a job, go work at burgerking, my bad you cant 'rap'.
Didnt like the concept or the punch in general
Playd out

You'll never be 'above my level' no matter what you drink.
See Red, the truth is that only real faggots would rock pink.
too much pink talk aint diggin it at ll


Over all dsecent battle for what it was.....
LM HEADGAMES not bad seen better from you.....

VOte red bull for better personals and punches....
Better wordplay aswell


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Voted For: lyrical madness

lm wins dis 1 his punches were harder i lyked his verse more my vote gose to lm easy as hein no quistions
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