Voted For: Mistic-Rogue

hey mistic wins this mists flow was o piont, mistic actaully had structure/
the punches were cool and had both opening and closer

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thx, uppin again!!

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Mystic-Rogue vs Plutonium
Mystic-Rogue vs Lil Bitz

uppin for some votes!

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Mystic-Rogue vs Plutonium
Mystic-Rogue vs Lil Bitz

Voted For: Mistic-Rogue

im gonna have to say that this was an aight battle....but with two different styles its hard to decipher....AITZ-you had a good thing goin in the beginning couple of bars....i dont know if you just got lazy or maybe you werent in the mood to write but you fell way off....Mystic-most def had more personal punches and better unpersonal punches like......."I'll choke you, cut your oesophegus and mess up your blodd patern//
Shove a candle up you ass and light you up like a jak-o-lantern//

Right, its time to diploy my arsenal, against my oppsotion//
This cats dumb found, and lies more than a politician//"....and i liked the way you ended your verse..........."Your name sounds like one of the many diseases you posses//
Although my verse finishes after 20 lines, the torture is still endless//"....that was a hot ender....and your verse flowed alot better....nice win....1

Voted For: Mistic-Rogue

Ill beat this cat into solatary inslavement//
Karate his ass and put his face in the pavement//

I'll choke you, cut your oesophegus and mess up your blodd patern//
Shove a candle up you ass and light you up like a jak-o-lantern//

Right, its time to diploy my arsenal, against my oppsotion//
This cats dumb found, and lies more than a politician//

You seldom see people, whos name sounds like a disease//
Im planning a lyrical offencive, that will beat you with ease//

Hes taking anitbiotics, to cure his sore ass, YOU FOOL//
The real cure would be to turn hetorasexual//

Im challenging more people, to make my self brainier//
While your loosing energy, like a blood donator//

My raps flow like a river, whiles yours flow like a glacier//
Hurry up man, im getting impatient here!!//

Im barracading my defecnces, to keep away your kind//
And im importing ray guns, that will leave yu dickless and paralized//

Can you understand my raps?, can you work them out as an individual?//
Or do i need to stoop to your level and be more pictorial//

<(X.X)> - this is you once
- i have finished
with you!!

Your name sounds like one of the many diseases you posses//
Although my verse finishes after 20 lines, the torture is still endless//
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ TIGHT~! GOOD PUNCHES GOOD FLOW GOOD STRUTURE AND WORDPLAYS KEEP DOIN YO THANG


nope i aint gonna choke ill spit a verse longa then ROPE//and wit that peice ill snap ur THROAT//nuttin u can do bar HOPE//ill miss the time and u'll win this NOPE it aint gonna happin im gonna b battlin til the day i die then aint no lie and if i miss this ill just slide on2 the next 1 just 4 fun ill kick u in the bum hold on hun dont worry bout ,y gun cause c that hole in the wall theres a 12 gage shootty pointing at yall cock it back "now who wants a crack" this bitch is a noob yo stop bein so rood and dissin ur self u aint welfy and not goona b u wanna b try hard gansta maybe thats y ur mumma spanked ya but yea give us some respect and ill make a note to put u in the next tourment cause im 2 high 4 u theres plent-y of battlers out there y u have to pic mey yo im gonna take this eazy hopen that u feel me and respect the australian rappers in this league so feel free to do wat u wanna cause i aint gonna stop ya and this unlimeted shit aint nuttin man u cant deal wit it i can keep going but ill stop real quik ppl this fella needs 2 raise the stakes im dealing wit amenturs that im eating like a peice of cake so raise the stakes and come bac wit somtin that ill love to hate call me insane but ur pic is on my wall wit a knife through ur brain im playin my game and chasing the fame
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ DAT WAS NOT AN GOOD VERSE
BECUZ DA STRUTURE WAS MESSED UP,,,,,,,,,DA FLOW IS MESSSED UP I COULDNT READ IT AITZ ELEVATE ON DA STRUTURE 'OK"

V-MISTIC CAUSE ALL AROUND BETTA VERSE

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uppin for some vote please!!! 1 more and it will be honestly returned!

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Mystic-Rogue vs Plutonium
Mystic-Rogue vs Lil Bitz

Voted For: Mistic-Rogue

aitz had a sloppy no flow structure all fucked up weak vocab and punches and disses aint hit it was just weak and thats being nice he needs to elevate badly a 2/10
mistic decent good vocab ok flow and structure a little streched but decnt here punches and disses were mediocre nice wordplay punches were dope in some spots weak in otheres he should be more consitent take more time to drop and weed the weak links out a 6/10
mystic wins with stronger punches and disses

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