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5 | 100.00% |
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Aint Afraid To Slaughter
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IP: 1BA0 E69C
uppin PLEASE!!! i really need a win!!! cmon, i merked em! vote 4 me!!!
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Aint Afraid To Slaughter
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IP: A190 A400
uuuuuuuuuupppppppppppppppppppppiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii iiiiiinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn!!!!!!!!
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DeTiCaTeD To A TrUe LyRiCiSt ![]() ThE NeW kIdS oN tHe BlOcK SuCk A lOt Of DiCk
BoY-gIrL gRoUpS MaKe Me SiCk AnD I cAn'T WaIt TiL i CaTcH aLl U FaGgOtS iN PuBlIc ImA LoVe It |
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Get Cooked Hoe
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IP: 0825 899A
Voted For: Eyvon
franchise yo struture is messed up work on dat though ok i read yo verse but der wasnt any decnt punches nor any flow so elevate on dat aight mayne eyvon- u had good flow and good punches i'll give dis to u vote on my battles aight (honest)
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Flyweight
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IP: E684 808B
Voted For: Eyvon
Etvon - good spit, your flow was hot, and your punches was srt8 fire. Best Line - im serious, u must b delerious/ so dreary, the weariest/ sit yo ass back down bitch, now hear me on this/ Worst Line - triple, its just me myself and i/ i aint bout 2 lose a battle oer sum guy/ the - iight spit, you need some work on your flow.. and your punches need some work. Best Line - yo this chick thinkin she the next eminem//this aint no 8 mile so u aint gunna win// Worst Line - u a damn lucky girl yo, i only got six lines// cuz ide murder u even if i was a god damn mime OVERALL - good battle, but I gotta give that too Eyvon, she came harder.. and her flow was better. The work on your flow.. and get some more thought out verses happenin. VOTE - Eyvon RETRUN THE FAV http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=153753
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23-7, 16 Knockouts
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IP: 7BE2 A0A1
Voted For: Eyvon
very newbieish battle it was vey weak. punches- i gave it to eyvon because his punches ere more clear, personal and hit harder than all of franchise's vocab- neither had high vocab although i think evyon got da one too, because franchise's vocab was relle basic structure and flow- went to eyvon because his verse was much more clearer than franchise. franchise u need to elevate and work on ur structure and flow and take off dem slashes its to rookish. my vote goes to eyvon |
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Light Weight
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IP: 24A3 0EF0
Voted For: Eyvon
eyvon won diz i cul make sense ov her rhymez so she winz
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