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ONE-MAN-BAND 5 83.33%
Empire 1 16.67%
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Old 10-01-04, 03:16 AM   #1
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no doubt you got this one on lock for sure juss wanted to check this out nice drop fam.
 
Old 10-01-04, 03:35 AM   #2
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was that to me?...?

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Old 10-01-04, 05:34 AM   #3
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Voted For: One-Man-Band

Ok honest vote...here it comes...OMB murdered this easily...Empire came pretty plain in this the structure and flow was basic and imagery lacked wordplay was aight i liked the 84-A-6459 line that was good but other than that i wasn't feelin it you have come better in the past but it looked like u didn't try in this battle.

OMB nice verse well layed out flowed well and structure went funny in places but the wordplay and imagery killed ur opponent fav lines included

“yeah word.. after the shit that happened to my LOYAL bros, it hurt to pass the aftermath, n bodies..”
“I know how ya feel.. wasn’t gonna tell ya… but… im Simms.. the cat they asked to grab the shotty”

&

He turned, looked me in the eyes… then sprinted off like the word “family” was nothing
I was like shit.. Alone in this house, men from both clicks dead, feelin played n abused
We was erased as a crew.. n im fucked.. hearin sirens, but im shocked here betrayed n confused

/\ dope bar

But Empire u needed to step up and ya didn't sorry dawg vote OMB
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Old 10-01-04, 08:36 AM   #4
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checking the polls.....
 
Old 10-01-04, 09:50 AM   #5
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just checking the polls...nice verse fam...........1
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Old 10-01-04, 03:14 PM   #6
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man this was a real gud battle, both came with some really gud shit here....

empire -
ur verse was tight, thought ur flow went in a few places at the beginning but apart from that ur flow was on point, structure was gud and wordplay was too. I thought ur improved as u got further in it just seemed to be flowing together real nice n easy, liked the end thought that was a gud finish and overall a gud drop...

one man blind -
dope dope dope....man u always rise to the challenge, this was one of the best topicals i've read for ages, ur flow was perfect to me went down real smooth in my head, structure was very gud liked the way it was broke down making it into a gud story, to be honest wen i see a verse that long i usually start to read but don't finish but here you kept me wantin to continue, ur wordplay was real tight and ur vocab was gud too....i'd give this a 9.5/10.....props n great read..

vote - one man blind

verdict - just was too strong for empire here, who against alot of people wud have won wiv his verse but just out classed on this occasion by a topical vet...

props to both...

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Old 10-01-04, 03:18 PM   #7
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^thanks for the honest vote damn you one man band
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Old 10-09-04, 06:46 AM   #8
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one man band i like u u can flow do u want 2 battle me an u won this battle but for sum reazon i cant vote
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Old 10-09-04, 06:56 AM   #9
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I wanna battle vets... plus i seen a drop of yours, wasnt up to par
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Old 10-09-04, 06:59 AM   #10
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i am 14 an dropped dat in 4 minutez i didnt even try
 
Old 10-09-04, 07:03 AM   #11
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well ok then, Ill battle you... then..............
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Old 10-09-04, 08:36 AM   #12
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chekin polls... dope shit from the both of yall... good luck
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Old 10-10-04, 10:53 AM   #13
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i really don't like these long battles but it all good there is most def only one winner and dat on man. i was feeling it i liked the talking in there some what creative and just over all good but empire wasn't feeling it is this your first topical? it better be cause it wack. you was just saying common stuff. really need to do better kid. oh and emp i check you battle stats you got like 50 closed battles were no spit (super gay aka the run away). plus every battle you did against some one good you lost horribly
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