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09-29-04, 05:42 PM
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Voted For: Fiya Spitter
Ok, this bitch ass hoe, hates everyone includin' him self If he had self pride, why would he ask EVERYONE and their cousin for help? lmao, good opener with a decent personal When I look at yo verse, I choose to jus remember "Sticks and stones" You do that too.... but yo gay ass begins to bone (1) nice punch, pretty decent Don't get excited, cuz those lines were jus the start If I wanted to hear from an "ass", I'd jus let out a stinky fart lol, decent punch man Yo lines all suck, why you rap still is a mystery Jus like my social studies book, I'm gon make yo ass history another decent punch, keeps em comin Every time you spit yo shit gets worse and even worse Jus like the Red Sox, I'm gon leave yo ass cursed nice punch again, baseball.... My verse will have you out of breath, you be thinkin' you Darth Vader I'll make you start to dissappear, like you were set on fader that is a good closer, best i seen in a while okay make dis quick for dis herb flya spitter nothin but a bull shitter thinks he's a nigga fuck you i'll pull ya da trigga admit it your shit when I see your shit it's gonna be liek a fuckin singer pretty poor opener, ok multies, but 2nd line made no sense you don't got good verses only herbish start spittin like some ger man you fuckin bitch ass gerbal i'll slit your fuckin wrists u sound like my gran! that was weak, i mean weak, did u say u wnated to slit your grans wrists? this punk is shitless and he got a problem wid MENTAL SICKNESS! just a ignorant dipshit talkin about suicide m8 is just plain thinkness! thinkness? did he tlk bout suicide? ok punch maybe this hoe is dickless he has no intrest thinks hes da best he's a rap guest someone unknown he's got no talent unblessed best punch i seen from you, ever This boys a cock muncher whos gonna get bullet hole punture don't worry i'll hunt ya i'll rip your ugly face and stun gun yer too much net thug, how you gonna do that man, this is text battle[b] you migit your a pissed boy on computer who's growin 2 be a loser a microphone abuser wid no punches but pussys about me and accuses [b]weak closer, and poor punch Sinner, elevate, SPuL nigka, thas dope
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09-29-04, 08:59 PM
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aiight, uppin' this shit............................
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09-29-04, 10:26 PM
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Ill Nigga Alert.
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IP: 7BE2 A0A1
Voted For: Fiya Spitter
Spul- your verse was much better i thought ...but dont get my wrong the other dude had an aight verse but yours was better...your punches hit hard too...some were kinda funny...your structure was good very eays to read and everything ...so overall ya got my vote for better verse and punches i thought honest vote... Da Point- your verse was good too...but your punches were aight but seem just didnt seem to connect or hit hard...your structure was decent but could use a little fixer upper...ya know...overall elevate more kid... v/Spul...
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09-29-04, 10:32 PM
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IP: ABE5 5A5C
Voted For: Fiya Spitter
Vote-Fiya Spitter came harder no real punches but was still good nice flow overall decent verse Da Point seriously wut was da point i mean ya verse was really wack u had no punches no wordplay n ok structure u need 2 elevate a lil more but u'll do good after a few battles vote on da battles in my sig i voted on ya battle
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09-29-04, 10:34 PM
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IP: CEDE 005F
Voted For: Fiya Spitter
Ok, this bitch ass hoe, hates everyone includin' him self If he had self pride, why would he ask EVERYONE and their cousin for help? ^ Kinda a weak opener man When I look at yo verse, I choose to jus remember "Sticks and stones" You do that too.... but yo gay ass begins to bone (1) ^ Again, not a strong punch Don't get excited, cuz those lines were jus the start If I wanted to hear from an "ass", I'd jus let out a stinky fart ^ Hehe, juvenile but fun Yo lines all suck, why you rap still is a mystery Jus like my social studies book, I'm gon make yo ass history ^ An average punch Every time you spit yo shit gets worse and even worse Jus like the Red Sox, I'm gon leave yo ass cursed ^ Hahahaha, Red Sox....smh My verse will have you out of breath, you be thinkin' you Darth Vader I'll make you start to dissappear, like you were set on fader ^ An alright closer now for Point flya spitter nothin but a bull shitter thinks he's a nigga fuck you i'll pull ya da trigga admit it your shit when I see your shit it's gonna be liek a fuckin singer ^ Doesn't really rhyme, empty multis you don't got good verses only herbish start spittin like some ger man you fuckin bitch ass gerbal i'll slit your fuckin wrists u sound like my gran! ^ Not a good punch at all this punk is shitless and he got a problem wid MENTAL SICKNESS! just a ignorant dipshit talkin about suicide m8 is just plain thinkness! ^ Again, pretty weak. Nothing strong about it this hoe is dickless he has no intrest thinks hes da best he's a rap guest someone unknown he's got no talent unblessed ^Doesn't really make much sense. Bad grammer This boys a cock muncher whos gonna get bullet hole punture don't worry i'll hunt ya i'll rip your ugly face and stun gun yer ^ Yer? Yer? Are you some kind of a hick? you migit your a pissed boy on computer who's growin 2 be a loser a microphone abuser wid no punches but pussys about me and accuses ^ An alright closer Basically Spul just came a lot harder with his punches. His were actually on point and hit harder. Point has a lot of elevating to do. Stay Up.
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