Voted For: Fiya Spitter

Vote-Fiya Spitter
came harder no real punches but
was still good nice flow overall decent
verse


Da Point
seriously wut was da point i mean
ya verse was really wack u had no punches
no wordplay n ok structure u need 2 elevate
a lil more but u'll do good after a few battles

vote on da battles in my sig i voted on ya battle

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OPEN BATTLES
WORDPLAYA VS Word-Scape

Voted For: Fiya Spitter

Ok, this bitch ass hoe, hates everyone includin' him self
If he had self pride, why would he ask EVERYONE and their cousin for help?
^ Kinda a weak opener man

When I look at yo verse, I choose to jus remember "Sticks and stones"
You do that too.... but yo gay ass begins to bone (1)
^ Again, not a strong punch

Don't get excited, cuz those lines were jus the start
If I wanted to hear from an "ass", I'd jus let out a stinky fart
^ Hehe, juvenile but fun

Yo lines all suck, why you rap still is a mystery
Jus like my social studies book, I'm gon make yo ass history
^ An average punch

Every time you spit yo shit gets worse and even worse
Jus like the Red Sox, I'm gon leave yo ass cursed
^ Hahahaha, Red Sox....smh

My verse will have you out of breath, you be thinkin' you Darth Vader
I'll make you start to dissappear, like you were set on fader
^ An alright closer


now for Point


flya spitter nothin but a bull shitter thinks he's a nigga fuck you i'll pull ya da trigga
admit it your shit when I see your shit it's gonna be liek a fuckin singer
^ Doesn't really rhyme, empty multis

you don't got good verses only herbish start spittin like some ger man
you fuckin bitch ass gerbal i'll slit your fuckin wrists u sound like my gran!
^ Not a good punch at all

this punk is shitless and he got a problem wid MENTAL SICKNESS!
just a ignorant dipshit talkin about suicide m8 is just plain thinkness!
^ Again, pretty weak. Nothing strong about it

this hoe is dickless he has no intrest thinks hes da best
he's a rap guest someone unknown he's got no talent unblessed
^Doesn't really make much sense. Bad grammer

This boys a cock muncher whos gonna get bullet hole punture
don't worry i'll hunt ya i'll rip your ugly face and stun gun yer
^ Yer? Yer? Are you some kind of a hick?

you migit your a pissed boy on computer who's growin 2 be a loser
a microphone abuser wid no punches but pussys about me and accuses
^ An alright closer




Basically Spul just came a lot harder with his punches. His were actually on point and hit harder. Point has a lot of elevating to do. Stay Up.

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