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View Poll Results: Who won this battle?
Judge & Jury 5 71.43%
[~*Lady Fiya*~] 2 28.57%
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Old 10-01-04, 07:05 PM   #16
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just checkin this battle out..... nice verse to both of you.... In council so i needa check out...
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Old 10-02-04, 10:18 AM   #17
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Voted For: [~*Lady Fiya*~]

Very Nice On both parts......My vote almost went 2 Judge Until I read this line again.
(LF)
He claimed it's old news, yet Fiya exposed what you won't tell!
Overratin' takin' this low-class vet from mobile homes to hotels!
<<<Nice punch, Great wordplay

<Keep dreamin' this is a diss, the first thing you'll do is accept it!
It's reality-checked by meta, after a week your crew's neglected!
<<Lmao Line Killer.

Mucous drip out ya pupil, school ya nervous system 2 paradox!
Only to discover a point loss, like puttin' black crayon on Xerox!!
<<Ugly but 2nd read Nice wordplay'd finish

(J&J)

Reppin AI, clearly letting u in wasn’t an intellectual decision…
Yo ass couldn’t spit fire if I gave u a fuckin rectal ignition…
<<Blazin Hit man...Nice

<Judge battling u, the biggest thing to happen in ure lonely life…
But u can’t really expect to win when I got an Eagle to ure rusty knife…
<<Ugly...I wouldnt have used that If I knew it would win

No hate In this at ALL


Wordplay: Both
Lmao Factor: Lf
Metas:Lf
Punches: Lf
Blazin Hit Factor:J&J

Vote By My decision.....

v/ Lady Fiya
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Old 10-02-04, 10:58 PM   #18
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Voted For: [~*Lady Fiya*~]

Decent Battle.

Lady Fiya seemed like she wanted it more ... Better Punches,better vocab,decent metaphors,nice flow ...

overall she took this battle ..

J&J ... you're verse was ok nothing too great. it flowed quite well ... and had some decent vocab... but i wasnt feelin it all that much....

yeh,im out
 
 


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