Voted For: TitoBronsky

skills like a life you lacking, what kinda knife you packing?
that shits commical now im through laughing
first line flows well, empty punch- not great.
only jesus saves and Halloweens 4 weeks away
we meet today, see the maker in a different grey
i like the way this was delivered but punch is kinda wonk
you cant grow skills on a farm kid...
This cat grew up milking cows now he wanna be hard shit!
good flow-
I didnt enter this forum upon bordom
Came to bring pain like needles in feinds on Fordham
best bar so far... decent punch
i skin a rat and sport 'em..... you feed a rat and spoil 'em
give them cheese, till they grow up ripe for boiling
descriptive writing... decent assonance in first line... needs more in the punch.
you are what you eat and im starving for beef
imma disarm your weapon, and start carving emcee
sick flow, my favorite bar here-- sounds real good off the toungue.
Your half hearted decrees of lyricism with ease
are dismissed before you spit or breath
decent bar here, good flow still - kinda weak punch.
I'll punch a hole through the side of your face
in a fit of violence and rage,then watch as your body decays
nice flow all-through... I think you gonna need to put more metas- and throw some wordplay in your punches to be real effective on this site, but your rhymes flow like an audio-cat..

skillz-


IP:

i was born ready this battle you betta not attempt/
anytime i'll blaze ya in my LONG JOHNS my gun is SILVER it'll turn u into shrimp/(long john silver)
this was a weak attempt at wordplay... ineffective punch-- stretched second line..
after i'm done wit u i'll leave u layed like yo bed sheet covers/
u will neva be able to see me like the eyes of stevie wonder/
no originality in the punch- first line was best and it wasn't very clever.
ima gangsta i'll leave u the same color of my crip set i'll leave u cold/
end up wit wit yo chest open like janet at the super bowl/
just not very original punches-- everything your sayin is old news... the crip set shit don't belong on a internet site either..
you should already know u applying to this battle is wrong/
cause once u reply i'll easily BEAT IT like michael jackson's song
blah- not feelin the punch- decent setup line though.
it might take you a long time before u reply to this battle man/
this win is going to be rounded up like u waz some farmer's cattle man/
battle man with cattle man is real basic... stretched second line... basic punch
after im done youll cheat and turn into a biter like mike(tyson)
wit the beam i'll pull u out of the crowd like the show PRICE IS RIGHT/
all of your punches were played... your flow wasn't as consistent as your opponents and you forced a rhyme or two, just not fun to read at all... Vote tito bronsky

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