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Old 09-30-04, 01:42 PM   #1
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This was a very nice drop...the multies it what stuck out the most. Nice work...peep mine...link in my sig. You could work on your stucture just a tiny bit more though...but overall nice work, keep it up.
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Old 09-30-04, 03:48 PM   #2
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thnx for the feed. All comment's are welcome and all favour's will be returned.......pz
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Old 09-30-04, 06:53 PM   #3
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Old 09-30-04, 07:47 PM   #4
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Nice drop. I felt the concept and that nerd line made me laugh bullets. One of your funniest,greatest pieces in a while "@". Nice job man, All I can say Is quit elevatin' Cause your hogging' The elevator key man. lol

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Old 10-02-04, 03:00 AM   #5
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Old 10-14-04, 08:34 PM   #6
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Old 10-14-04, 08:37 PM   #7
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nice concept wordplay and flow dope is all i can sya good work @.
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Old 10-15-04, 01:26 AM   #8
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i was feeling this all throughout no need for explainin great wordplay .. nice volcab .. sick multi's...all was to the point and i just thought it was off the hook.nice man keep it up...i seen some of your shit and its tight...so its just natural for you i guess.hahah.peace~1

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Old 10-27-04, 02:51 AM   #9
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lol, i could see this was a freestyle

very very good!! your vocab was very nyce..ur structure was very nyce.. n u were very much on topic (cuz there was no topic) lol... you are actually pretty good... I liked how you rhymed alot with one word... and now that gives me an idea.. Just make it longer or w/e next time.. lookin forward to more 8/10
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