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Voted For: caliph

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caliph wins
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Voted For: caliph

...Spittin out raps soundin like malarky, invisible... gettin stop by my rap dimocracy, hipocracy alls ya spit, when my flows put ya out miraculosly/
Didn't Rhyme^ No Punch. 0/10
...Ya gettin rejected like kids to small for rides, commin up short at designated times, ya raps be like dirty pipes, how ya spittin resinated ryhmes/
Is It Just Me Or Did That Not Make Scense^ 2/10
...Poppin this newbs top like a shampagne cork, bendin and twistin An's more then bikes on torque, / ya never gone all the way, only cummin to a fork/
To the end of the week I live by the beat like you live check to check, and if you no move yo feet then I dont eat so we like neck to neck.
^The Flow Was Off Mad^ Not Reall A Great Punch 3/10

Ya Flow Was Off Structure Was Bad Too......No Punches And Half Didn't Make Scense......

This rookie wanna push me damn he suicidal as fuck
Its over like 4 leaf clovers he survive me its luck
Nice Punch^ I Heard That Before But Still A Good Punch..7/10
One zero on both sides its hopeless for you to keep it the same
If you threw up gasline on a bonfire you still couldnt spit flames
Lmao! Dope Bar. Nice Use Of Metas. 8.5/10
Ya elevations placement underground like dearly departed
And i ended ya rapverse career before it even started
Nice Closer Punch Hit Hard. 7.5/10

Cal, Ya Structure Was Betta, Flow Was Better, Punches Were Better.
BK Fix Ya Structure And Be More Creative Wit Ya Punches.
Overall Cal Took This Wit a Better Verse.

Voted For: caliph

i think caliph came a lil harder n had a betta flow. he also has sum better personals so im givin it to......
vote=caliph

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Voted For: caliph

umm this wasnt a very good battle. ok punches. ok battle. caliph had better punches, better flow, better structure.

bkbrawla u forced a lot of the rhymes. your punches werent very hard at all.

work on harder punches and u'll get better

vote-caliph

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Voted For: caliph

caliph: i'm guessing this is a old battle....
decent overall verse nothing special flow=smooth
and nice effectiveness..............DA DA DOO....

bk: decent aswell.....

flow was niiiice and some lines were effective
and some original aswell...but i still have to choose...

blah!

vote/Caliph close in my opinion

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Voted For: BkBrawla

caliph...



IP:

This rookie wanna push me damn he suicidal as fuck
Its over like 4 leaf clovers he survive me its luck
played.

One zero on both sides its hopeless for you to keep it the same
If you threw up gasline on a bonfire you still couldnt spit flames
old and played as well.

Ya elevations placement underground like dearly departed
And i ended ya rapverse career before it even started
ok.


BkBrawla...

...Spittin out raps soundin like malarky, invisible... gettin stop by my rap dimocracy, hipocracy alls ya spit, when my flows put ya out miraculosly/
no..dont like it
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...Ya gettin rejected like kids to small for rides, commin up short at designated times, ya raps be like dirty pipes, how ya spittin resinated ryhmes/
ehh could of been better.
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...Poppin this newbs top like a shampagne cork, bendin and twistin An's more then bikes on torque, / ya never gone all the way, only cummin to a fork/
dont like it muc.
To the end of the week I live by the beat like you live check to check, and if you no move yo feet then I dont eat so we like neck to neck. (OutKast)..................
nah..

i see BkBrawla taking this battle with a more solid verse,
his concepts were better and as well as the setups which
made his punches land harder...both came played and new
to work on wording better and brawla get rid of the "......"
"//" ----" those make your verse less interesting to read.

V/ BkBrawla.

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Voted For: caliph

cal wordplay and flow was a lil more there for me thats why i vote for him

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Voted For: BkBrawla

aight brawla got this..........
the structure could have been better, but other then that he got this hands down, better punches, better personals, an decent wordplay....

aliph, ya flow lacked crfeativity an imagination, it was too plain n simple..........

return the fave yall
peace

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Voted For: caliph

caliph takes this one...

better wordplay, STRUCTURE, punches and personals...
an all around better verse... no hate to BK but u gotta get better with that structure hommie cause thats what puts it togeather and makes it flow.....

no hate brotha.

VOTE- Caliph

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Voted For: BkBrawla

This rookie wanna push me damn he suicidal as fuck
Its over like 4 leaf clovers he survive me its luck
^ Elementry rhyme, weak punch with the clover

One zero on both sides its hopeless for you to keep it the same
If you threw up gasline on a bonfire you still couldnt spit flames
^ Weak, played concept

Ya elevations placement underground like dearly departed
And i ended ya rapverse career before it even started
^ Again, no real punch weak

2/10


...Spittin out raps soundin like malarky, invisible... gettin stop by my rap dimocracy, hipocracy alls ya spit, when my flows put ya out miraculosly/
^ Terribly stretched, alright punch

...Ya gettin rejected like kids to small for rides, commin up short at designated times, ya raps be like dirty pipes, how ya spittin resinated ryhmes/
^ The rejected punch was aight

Poppin this newbs top like a shampagne cork, bendin and twistin An's more then bikes on torque, / ya never gone all the way, only cummin to a fork/
^ Hard to understand

To the end of the week I live by the beat like you live check to check, and if you no move yo feet then I dont eat so we like neck to neck.
^ Aight closer


Basically, caliph's rhymes were weak and he didn't have any punches. BKBrawla had some strong punches even though some of them were whack.

Vote- BK

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Voted For: BkBrawla

bawla u gay bitch i will murder yo azz u bastard u r whacked u lost diz battle bitch

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