Voted For: B.I.Detained

Socrates
structure is good.. flow is on target.. no multis.. and minus points for rhyming with and with in ur last bar.. i only liked the wordplay in ur first bar, the rest wasnt to good.. more of ur punches would have connected if u would have set them up right.. the set up u used for ur punches took away from their effect.. attempted personal.. it was decent..

B.I.Detained
structure is good.. flow is on target.. no multis.. dope wordplay.. that line about Socrates bein a great battler in his time pretty much did it for me.. most of ur punches connected, though as i previously stated, the one about Socrates was ur best.. and once again, seein as the Socrates line was a personal, that was dope..

Overall
both had a good structure.. both had a good flow.. neither had multis.. B.I.Detained had better wordplay.. more connecting punches.. and better personals.. so basing off of that.. B.I.Detained gets my vote..

VOTE - B.I.DETAINED

Voted For: Socrates

Socrates: seen better out of u but it was good, structure was good unsual but i could follow it, ya flow was basically on point, had some nice meta's, punches was hitting good, liked the real friends line, ya had a nice opener and and even better closer, 8/10



B.I.: good structure besides one stretched line, could have came better too, i liked ya opener, verse flowed good for most of the part, like the water color line, punches was hitting on and off, had a few good meta's, few nice personals in their, ya closer was ok, 6/10


vote - Socrates


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Contradictitory fuckin homosexual I mean look at this guy
He' sayin im ass, and wants to eat me..
...no wonder hes bi!Lines 13 and 14 are usless, cuz youre already done with
I'm not even expectin you to drop..
..you aint got a dick to come with
This ugly fuck needs to leave, his face looks like shit
Not only is he early for Halloween...
...hes the fuckin reason it exists!

The only good lines you had the halloween was a bit funyn but the dick one was played

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A.I is the elite rite? but you're in it & when I come to think..
Fucka Anne Robinson..Ray Charles cud see you're A.I's weakest link

Socrate's beat him.. B.I's line's made me want to sleep but because Socrate's might say it's a hate vote or something that's just feedback.

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Voted For: Socrates

Socrates:
Must be crazy battling me, and if you dont mind me askin
Why did you step up to the plate...with a spoon and a napkin?
Good creativity here, punch was aight, good opener 3.5/5
Contradictitory fuckin homosexual I mean look at this guy
He' sayin im ass, and wants to eat me...no wonder hes bi!
Good punch here, nice play off his name, 4/5
I'm only commin half ass and still easily break his neck
But hes only mad...cuz he doesnt get the full effect
A little self-glorifying, but even so punch wasn't that hard, 2.5/5
This is a net traveler, been on sites from here to the end
What else do you expect from someone...who doesnt have REAL friends!
Punch was ehh, didn't connect really, 2/5
Just cuz hes from RB he wants everyone to be on him
But for you people jumping on his dick...hes really into bondage.*
Another good play off his name, but the punch just wasn'nt that hard, 2.5/5[/B]
This ugly fuck needs to leave, his face looks like shit
Not only is he early for Halloween...hes the fuckin reason it exists!
Nice personal here, the rhyming was a lil' off, but punch was good, 3/5
Lines 13 and 14 are usless, cuz youre already done with
I'm not even expectin you to drop...you aint got a dick to come with!
Punch was good, that's about all there is to this bar, 3/5
Total: 20.5/35

B.I.Detained:
Daughtering this faggot.. his material will never be in demand
He did hold heat once.. when my verse was in his hands.
Self-glorification, not a good opener, 2/5
More suited for Making The Band.. suits ya down to a tee,
Soc could be the biggest urd of all..& still not mean shit to me.
Good wordplay here, punch was just a little above average, 3.5/5
Your nuttin as you'll see.. let me paint you a picture now,
Soc's whole Reps a water color.. the way it just fades out.
Good meta here, but there wasn't much of a punch, 2.5/5
Fuck this bitch up and watch him want me in his crew
Socrates was a amazing battler in his time.. unlike you.
Good personal, punch was aight, 3/5
Your draws are full of girly shit.. you dirty little Quim
This guy was wearing stockings.. so I had to go & Soc' him.
More good wordplay, good punch too, 4/5
A.I is the elite rite? but you're in it & when I come to think..
Fucka Anne Robinson..Ray Charles cud see you're A.I's weakest link
Punch didn't come that hard, line was stretched, 2/5
Enuf of the played shit.. I ain't one to flip concepts
But its to do it to someone who has no respect
Not that good of a closer, punch didn't connect, 1.5/5
Total: 18.5/20

Winner: Socrates with harder punches, although B.I came with some damn good wordplay. Return the vote to a link in my sig, honest explained votes only...

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hahaha you lost horribly to him, your punches your shorter than a t-rexs

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Voted For: Socrates

Socrates:
Socrates Had Some Good Lines Kid Came Hard Close Battle Socrates Had SOme Punches Some Multi's I See Them Personals In There Was Tight Cuzzin Lines Came One After ANother Good Flow Vocabulary Was Cool Structure Was Good Decent But Personals Was Tight Kid Good Battle Socrates Had A Better FLow So He Gets My VOte

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Voted For: Socrates

I think that Socrates got this battle because i feel that Socrates came stronger in the following categories...Punches i felt Socrates got it they were used effectifely and were on point B.I u shoulda been a bit more creative on this occasion personals i felt went to Socrates good lookin wordplay and creativity goes to Socrates and flow and structure i'll give to Socrates.

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