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10-11-04, 06:25 PM
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Cool drop...structure was a bit different from wut ive seen but it was decent...the multis and flow was nice....hook was nice....imagery and overall piece was nice too...this was a lil over decent drop....felt it tho...give it a 8.4/10
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10-11-04, 06:26 PM
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Geaux Fuck Yourself
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thnx... uppin'.
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10-11-04, 06:58 PM
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Yesh this was dope VP
Nice structre, use of multi's and flow..... This peice would be dope in audio...... ANyways this shit was worth the read.... 8-10 Peace and peep any of my poetry or open mics if you want.....
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10-11-04, 06:59 PM
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Geaux Fuck Yourself
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thnx Ice Pick... uppin'.
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10-12-04, 01:19 PM
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Geaux Fuck Yourself
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uppin' for feedback
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10-13-04, 05:41 PM
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«αи αятιѕт σf ωσя∂ѕ»
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Breathe... 1 and to the 2, 2 and to the 3, lol
aiight, this was a pretty dope drop, man. I liked the wordlpay and shit. Real deep shit. I thought it was some version of the Fab song. But it wasn't. Nice shit, man. props. Structure was fucked however. but overall, dope shit. pc
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10-13-04, 06:01 PM
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this is a dope drop man, i was feelin the chorus and the flow of it is great, nice vocabulary and multies in this as well, overall good piece...1
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10-14-04, 02:10 PM
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Geaux Fuck Yourself
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uppin' for more feedback.
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10-19-04, 01:55 PM
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Geaux Fuck Yourself
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IP:
uppin' for feedback.
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10-20-04, 01:46 PM
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Geaux Fuck Yourself
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God damn motha fuckaz... uppin' for FEEDBACK
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10-21-04, 06:23 PM
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IP:
Wat?? this is all?????????????????
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10-21-04, 06:24 PM
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IP:
its dope.... i want to see more...
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10-21-04, 06:30 PM
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IP:
Lovin all them multi's and world play
Thought it could use some better flow or structure But in the end, it's good
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10-21-04, 07:18 PM
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Geaux Fuck Yourself
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IP:
Thanks for the feeback y'all... appreciate it greatly.
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10-21-04, 08:44 PM
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Yeah Playa!!
IP:
Noice drop, that was some dope shit keep writing I thought there were a couple things you could work on. But overall I thought the structure was pretty good & it was laced with some sweet rhymes
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