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Voted For: Infamuz

fam's lines were better structured, with j's its hard to tell wher it ends work on that structure man for real, and fam had alot more personal hits.

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Voted For: Infamuz

Infamuz took this easy...

J-nutty, u've got a lot of elevatin to do...everything in your verse was played n weak...n the structure was horrible...u need to hit enter after every line, cuz i guarantee u wont win wit a structure like that...

Infamuz, i really didnt feel u had much in your verse either...u had punches, but none of 'em really stood out...but at least your structure was better...n u dont need the //// <--takin those out is up to u, but if u decide to keep puttin 'em in, voters wont like it, jus a forewarnin....anyways...

V/ Infamuz, no hate, jus some honest feedback...

Voted For: Infamuz

flow and struct: this goes to infam because his is betta put together and flows betta
punches: the few i saw but goes to infam
multis: Infam but both lacked them
Personals: both had them bu Infam portrayed them more
enjoymen: i liked infam more on this

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