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Verbal Abuse | 2 | 28.57% | |
Myth | 5 | 71.43% | |
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10-18-04, 07:11 PM | #1 | |
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uppin
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uppin for honest votes peeps, let's get this closed
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SPul: 20,000/10,000 debt Verbal Abuse: lied about not battling me in verse 4 wins - 1 losses - 1 ko
...A Legacy is born...
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10-17-04, 04:02 PM | #2 | ||
Ya Skills Are Just Myth
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i'll stretch my lines however i please and i always right in small font, if u don't believe me check all of my battles, uppin for this
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-NET RECORD- 17 wins-8 losses-2 dq's- 9 K.O'S -NEED VOTES-
vs. Wildfire (down 2-1) vs Ice Pick (up 2-1) vs Verbal Abuse (up 4-2) vs Raw Material (up 3-0) vs String9487 (tied 1-1) -ROOKIE OF THE MONTH- September
*EMPIRE GETS PEOPLE DQ'D WHILE DUCKING*
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10-17-04, 06:17 PM | #3 | ||
In ya area.
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Voted For: Verbal Abuse
I was gonna break it down but it's almost impossible to do with Myth's verse. Your rhyme scheme is incredibly fucked up, it was hard for me to follow. Your punches weren't that hard either, you just gotta keep elevatig though bro. Verbal came with multis, harder punches, and a better structure overall. This was just an honest vote though, and it goes to VA... Return the vote to a link in my sig, honest explained votes only...
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10-17-04, 10:40 PM | #4 | ||
Ya Skills Are Just Myth
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uppin for honest feedback peeps
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-NET RECORD- 17 wins-8 losses-2 dq's- 9 K.O'S -NEED VOTES-
vs. Wildfire (down 2-1) vs Ice Pick (up 2-1) vs Verbal Abuse (up 4-2) vs Raw Material (up 3-0) vs String9487 (tied 1-1) -ROOKIE OF THE MONTH- September
*EMPIRE GETS PEOPLE DQ'D WHILE DUCKING*
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10-17-04, 11:01 PM | #5 | |
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Voted For: Myth
aight... nice battle nice battle... yall both came pretty hard and i respect that big time... verbal first off know this aint a hate vote but it is my opinion Myth won this one... the punches about prewriting and shit was used by both so i liked how they countered eachother on that one... the line that won this one for Myth was the muhamad ali closer.. i was really feelin that shit big time hommie... here is my break down... Multis-neither wordplay-Myth Punches/Personals-Myth Metas-Myth Structure-both Overall Verse- Myth aight like i said.. mad props to both of yall but this one goes to myth with pretty much an overall better battle verse... no hate tho to verbal cause i know she came hard and i got a lotta respect for that so props for that one... but this one goes to myth.... VOTE- MYTH
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10-18-04, 08:59 PM | #6 | |
Umm...Yeah
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This was feedback posted for Myth
IP:
i want to see who wins.............................
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10-19-04, 05:26 AM | #7 | |
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IP:
uppin for more honest votes peeps, let's get this shit closed
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Cowards
SPul: 20,000/10,000 debt Verbal Abuse: lied about not battling me in verse 4 wins - 1 losses - 1 ko
...A Legacy is born...
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10-19-04, 05:26 AM | #8 | |
Executing these herbs
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IP:
uppin for more honest votes peeps, let's get this shit closed
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Cowards
SPul: 20,000/10,000 debt Verbal Abuse: lied about not battling me in verse 4 wins - 1 losses - 1 ko
...A Legacy is born...
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10-20-04, 06:36 AM | #9 | ||
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Voted For: Myth
Damn... Myth killed with all the personals/punches... a very one-sided battle here. Verbal: records better than mine. but whos bitchin? when ya rep is smitten. i guess ma text aint hittin. or ya battlin dopes without blessed prewrittens. hmmm... set-up was cool but then she dissed herself and ended the line kinda wack cause i only key to vets, i guess this battles just not my style. ya living cause ya not the underdog. unlike me, ya jock survival. ehhh.. nothing happening here... didn't rhyme either.... pretty forced ya internet beefin. ya couldnt be decent orally, so ya fax jokes. the open mic links in ya siggy arent links. ya must be that dope. wack this verse is hatred. from start to mission statement, ya once rhymed. youd like to think ya made profit, but ya just elevating front lines. no punch... what was the point of this line? i shoulda dropped 8 lines, so ya had a chance to come through with a win. youd like to think ya place is safe in this race, but ya just pacing us fems. good closer but that's about all ya had going for ya in this one... the whole verse shoulda been on this level. 10 minute, quick key... ...this kid had been bitching about me not checking in all week, ive dropped now, i he hasnt even checked. how ironic. pz. good point^^...lol MYTH: ducked the first battle so u could prewrite, verse needed practice * 3-3 what happened to u being a vet, u shouldn't of changed ya tactics * verbal beating me is like leg amputee's performing numerous back flips good opener...watch the line stretching, though...kinda threw me off at first going with 3 lines as opposed to 2 afraid to drop? fronting saying u were busy with the natural selection * a buttaface? i saw ya pictures, ya beat, but is that ya actual complection * more personals... again, ya lines seemed a bit stretched verbal abuse..naw? i rather hit the next level, domestic violence * talent? nope abuse skills don't exist like cops arresting pirates set-up was good but ya ended this line kinda flat... doubts? u even said it ya self that the dickless can't be hard * va's talent couldn't stand out if she was in a camp full of retards again, good set-up but ya ended kinda soft... finish with a punch instead of love taps sex..naw? i paid attention in health, i rather stay away from the clap structure problems, va's lines stretch farther then ones on subway maps ehhh...ok... what's sex gotta do with ya follow-up line? ya lines and punches should lead into each other... seems like ya just wanted sum'n to rhyme here ya career's plunging fast like jamicans running down a steep hill racing claim u hot, ya couldn't come sick if ya skills were fat people embracing worst line ya dropped so far...no connection... no punch rumors? naw the speculations are true, u sent ya pictures to one-man-band * va showing skill would shock peeps like muhammad ali performing hand stands closer coulda been better ... i noticed a pattern here... ya set-ups are golden but then ya end all of ya lines flat... and wussup with all the questions at the beginning of each line? stay away from doing that so much...it's a little annoying... work on ya structure... ya lines seemed to stretch... not a lot but it's still noticeable... the thing that saved you in this battle was the tons of personals ya threw in there... work on connecting ya punches and finishing stronger and you'll be the shyt... keep at it one |
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