Yo man I actually read this all today nice drop 8/10!! I'm not agreeing with your other critiques about your style It is good don't get me wrong. I thought it could a little more direction and originality. Every rapper has got to have their own technique You have a good one I just think if you re-edited this song you can make it more product material you know what i mean. Props man that was just shy from perfect, not too many kats on here are better than you, well i guess it all comes down to one minute!!!
can't wait to check you out on audio!!