Voted For: BkBrawla

i hate cry baby little girls, im better than you cuz you sing/
you only have beef and brawl at BK, Burger King/
^^ aight weak ass opener man 3/10 only pts was for the weak personal
You are not as good look at my name and know im better/
i will leave your body so red, lit students will think its a letter/
^^ this didnt make sense a red body cant be a letter.just seemed like you tryed to rhyme with better no good punches 2/10
you fag boy, dont get so touchy touchy/
cuz if i said i was pussy, youd just be scared of me/
^^ weak punch wasnt much flow 2/10
7/30 cuz weak ass punches and personals.....not much flow..elementry wordplay and it was just whacked i didnt like it the only thin you had was structure


u call yo self suparappa da only time u call yo self dat when u put yo big lips and wraop on an dudes dick//
u know u like that licorice dick,,,i'll knock dis kid out of existance my punches come hard dey neva an path of least resist (easy)
^^aight okay opener coulve been better but okay personal and flow was sketchy saw some multi's but lines are too stretched 5/10
like yo favorite game i'll ripp yo chess off i spit lyrical acid through ur brain it will dissolve// (make it mushy kinda like)
I'll murder you so bad da csi wont solve dis murder case i'll cutt yo face in pieces like dat dude paintings i'll refraim yo face// (some painting its all mixed up idk)
^^okay nice multi's and ood punches but again stretched lines but good flow shoulda rhymed the last words of the lines 7/10
i'll put hemeroges in yo eyes so its an sign of strangled,,,,yo face being torn up cause u gettin mangled u got stuck in my spider web u been tangled//
your the mous iam the kat,,, your an pussie iam a thorough my 9'z rippin through yo torso u cant take dese full blowz,,,,like i did to yo rhymes and yo girl did to my dick it blowz//
^^okay okay multi's could have been a lil better for a closer but it was good flowing but it you shoulda rhymed the last words of your lines but its okay once again stretched lines tho6/10
18/30

okay supa had the structure and that was it
you need to not stretch your lines so much
but nice punches
okay personals
good flow
nice multi's

v/bkbrawla

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