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View Poll Results: Who won this battle? | |||
GangsStarShit | 5 | 100.00% | |
dflow | 0 | 0% | |
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11-02-04, 07:54 AM | #16 | |
Hates Fucking Idiots
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IP: 07E0 A9F2
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11-02-04, 10:57 AM | #17 | |
I just don't give a fuck!
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IP: A10D 4933
Voted For: GangsStarShit
i think that GangsStarShit got this one. D ya structure let ya down on this, coz i could hardly read it. It was all mixed in. just get rid of the /'s coz they mess up ya verse. couldn't really see any decent punches neither. nice creativity from gangstar. had some nice use of meta in here. I give gangstar this based on a better structured verse anda more cmplex verse:- metas and wordplay. Votes: GangsStarShit |
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11-02-04, 11:16 AM | #18 | |
Hates Fucking Idiots
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IP: 07E0 A9F2
/\ very nice way to use ur 1,000th post uppin this
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11-02-04, 11:43 AM | #19 | |
The Watcher
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IP: 28D6 AD76
Voted For: GangsStarShit
blah battle... dflow...it's apparent you're a newb...cuz ya verse was newbish...no hate dawg, but u need to up ya game...ya shit was simply to basic, try and be more creative next time...and the worst part was your structure...you need to press enter after every line, it'll make ya shit look cleaner... GS, u had a meh verse...but then again, i guess you didnt have to try that hard...punches were aight, not outstandin, but aight...stucture was decent....but anyways, i know you can do better than that...but nevertheless, V/ GS for better overall verse (structure mainly)... |
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11-02-04, 02:21 PM | #20 | |
Black Poet
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IP: CCAE A7E8
Voted For: GangsStarShit
Nice battle I thought flow come ok but I did feel the way you droped that verse.. Didn't really feel your punches and there wasnt any wordplay.... Gangsta ~ come hott nice verse with nice word play I thought the punches was on point and hit hard.. I also liked the way you droped the verse. Vote ~ G |
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