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Old 10-24-04, 10:33 PM   #1
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Old 10-25-04, 02:43 PM   #2
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Old 10-25-04, 11:27 PM   #3
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Man This Getting More Ups Than Votes,
Socrate You Set The Bar Two High For Votesm Your Friends Wont Even Come And Vote
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Old 10-26-04, 02:14 PM   #4
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Old 10-26-04, 09:20 PM   #5
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just checkin shit out and uppin

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Old 10-26-04, 09:21 PM   #6
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oops sorry have this deleted i was just uppin my bad
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Old 10-26-04, 11:57 PM   #7
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thanks for uppin homie............................................. ..
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Old 10-27-04, 01:20 PM   #8
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Old 10-27-04, 01:30 PM   #9
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So c r a tes won but not by far . . Infact that verse was half assesd.
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Old 10-27-04, 08:39 PM   #10
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This was feedback posted for oreo

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Old 10-28-04, 12:10 AM   #11
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oh my god wat the fuck no one votin and socrates dont even try and up this shit
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Old 10-28-04, 03:13 AM   #12
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Voted For: Socrates

Im tired of this fuck up, god dammit its makin me mad
So pathetic he has to sig the only vote hes ever had
almost
Blah actually i only battled cuz i have nothing to do
your records 5-5, thats zero and its still more than you
word your shit better. this line also makes no sense the way its worded, the setup is terrible.
Peepin your verse and all i can say is fuck commas kid
Your shit is one run-on sentence of how whack you is
could have been decent, wording kinda killed it.
Im dunkin oreo, whether its in milk, soda or coffee
Didnt make sense cuz I think this poor fuck will try to rob me
wtf? no.
oreo thinks hes better? seriously something aint right
only chants he has is the ones boo'ing him off the mic
kinda played, but at least its wordplay. flipped decently, setup even worded decently
reck careers for biting newbs, what makes you different foo?
not that we dont like you, we just hate loathe and despise you
terrible filler, didn't even flow
Youve been roasted with your pathetic attempts to cook me
Youre the reason people no longer say "One Smart Cookie"
not bad nameplay

Vote: socrates.

you still need to get a lot better.
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Old 10-28-04, 03:15 AM   #13
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wtf i hate this voting system. ill break this down again, because it got lost:

you left this site and came bak cuz i crushed your dream,
how can a man stiil be a pussy without a hysterectimine?
don't use words you don't understand. hysteractamy is removing some of the uterus. it means less pussy, not more pussy. your line makes no sense
you lost royaly in the battle when your alais named strobe,
couldnt even up your game if you used an X-box as a probe,
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you and empire got somthin in common, hate threads man,
this aint even web beef you this is more internet spam,
blah, horrible filler with no flow
dont battle no more, nostradomas made you a freeposter,
bars coudnt even be hot if they were popped out a toaster,
horrible meta, no wordplay, two lines have no relevence to each other
this oreo is unedible, if you get a vote then you got a taste,
you caint come back this rap shit and get repsect like ma$e,
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really a computer nerd that wants to make it as a rapper,
told me to kiss your black ass but your really a cracker,
i dont think he is
screaming yeah, cuz you got this shit bad mother fucka,
remind me again and youll feel the lyrical burn like usher,
played

well there you have it.

work on setups and punches having to do with each other, work on wordplay thats not so stupid, work on better metas.
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Old 10-28-04, 01:05 PM   #14
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socrats is white yo i saw his pic as his alias..........................
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Old 10-30-04, 02:19 AM   #15
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