upp'in this shit yet again.....................................

dajokah holla at me about D2R....

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upp'in this battle dont sleep on my verse people.......

upp'in this battle mang dont sleep on my verse....

upp'in for more votes people dont sleep on this battle........

upp'in for votes people dont sleep...................

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Voted For: intensify effect

Aight from start the battle was intensify effect. He came harder than Da Jokak666.
the flow Cocaine with an arsenal Bush Brought, i aint trying to stop ya mind.. just stuff it in a walk-man-N-push-Pause... * ouch* 3
This line was tight and very creative. This caught me and made me vote 4 u. Jokah need to work on your lines and punches. no hate. Holla Back!!!!!!!!!

Return da fava

Surgical vs Oreo

nice may'n........uppin this.......................

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Voted For: intensify effect

FINALY...a real fuckin battle...

I.E.: intensify effect had real good punches...and his flow and structure were flawless...his multies...and his punches came hella hard...and the wordplay was clever as hell...

Da Jokah666: nice drop...u had tite punches and wordplay too...ur multies were aight...i didnt see as many as in I.E. verse...but it was still a hella tite drop...some of ur punches were a little basic...u should use more personals...

i dunno...this was a hella hard decision...i think this 1 mite be a coin flip...but n e way...NO HATE...

v/ I.E.

Voted For: intensify effect

Well When I Read This i jus Thought I Lil Gain for I.F. and They way His Structure Fits wit his flows and that mellows n Wit His PUNCHEZ which were great and Made me laugh At how he dissed DJ i think That DJ Underestimated IF By A longshot if i have one word of advice to DJ neva let ya gaurd down
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A Yall Plz Return The favor and Vote in My Battlez I Only Have two and their Rii At the End all Thats neede is like 2 to 3 votes but um Yall Plz Return the favor it would b the right thing to do and I would really appreciate it afta I took The time to vote N Ya BAttles It Would B Rii
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upp'in this battle........................................

yo can we get a few more honest votes to end this battle already.........

Voted For: intensify effect

I.E.
Structure Wasnt That Decent But It Was Good...Vocabulary Was Decent ....Punches Was There.....WordPlay Was Tight...Personals Okay....Overall Your Structure Wasnt That Much Decent But Every Thing Else Was There.....8/10

DaJokah99:
Okay Your Structure Was The Only Thing Good Here Punches Wasnt There.....I Wasnt Feeling It....Wordplay Wasnt All That.....Personals Not Much Decent But Vocabulary Was Kind Of Good..OverAll You Punches And Personals Wasnt There......7/10

Ps Retrun The Favor And CheckOut The Battle Me[4] Vs Kwell[2]
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Voted For: Da Jokah666

structure jokah u had good structure int u need to work on it
flow jokah int's was off due to his structure
dajokahs punchess actually had me laughin and well i think thats what u should do in a battle personaly so jok for better flow vocab structure and it was funnier int elevate buckaroo

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Voted For: intensify effect

Damn This Was A Hot Battle... Heres My Breakdown...

intensify effect

IP:


dajokah couldnt be deadly if he was the son of the 6-6-6....
the sum of this sick-spit-shit... equals u'r mouth getting hit-split-quick..... 1
Good Opener, Good Multies And An Alright Punch
let the fighting erupt, kid mus be delievering testicles.... cuz he Driving-Me-Nuts..... *ha*
i'll carve this jokah insides just to prove that when battling me... he's deprived-of-guts.... 2
Damn, Two Punches Back To Back That Are Nice.. Def Nice
im Aiming-With a Marksmen... my crooks lunch missle to leave u stained in a coffin.. no shook-thoughts....
the flow Cocaine with an arsenal Bush Brought, i aint trying to stop ya mind.. just stuff it in a walk-man-N-push-Pause... * ouch* 3
OUCH IS RIGHT.. Fuckin Sick
its strickly inasne when i bomb kids.. pray that sadam hits, Spraying with strong spits... the statement is to stomp cliques....
to put it plainly... im Gods Gift N could have been ya daddy back.... insted i left stain's on ya moms tits.. * ha* 4
OUCH
i'll choke u out at a crip turff... cuz fuck blood... u'll look better in blue *suffercated*
and after this battle just look at ya sig N think.... danm... I.E was that much better then u.....
Good Personal



Highlights:

Back To Back Punches
Great Use Of Multies

DimLights:
There Were Only Two Personals That I Saw..

Overall :
Your Verse Was On Point. Good Job



Da Jokah666

IP:


Intesify effect, well i guess that the rumours of u are a true, newb basher
easily mistaken for a newb coz they can't decide which herb is wacker
I Wasnt Really Feeling This, No Great Punch And Only A 2 word Multi
Kid you a joke, Sinking in quicksand... and i still wouldn't arrive on ya level
Disabled him, now he rocks metal,retarded...bet mommy says he "special"
Lol Kinda Funny, But Kinda Wack.. Not A Good Diss
ur crew was full of more jokes than the apollo, I guess that was the end
So I open ya skull, jizz in ya brain, so im glad that you cum to your sense
OUCH
This kid aint the weather men so ma flow got u strapped like a leather band
Last time i seen "bad" "flows" like that it was open hour at Jacko's Neverland
LOL OUCH
This kid packs dildos, so he fake and ready to be beat, and don't duck
Your shitshould come equppied wit hover attachment coz ya flows suck
LOL Alright Finisher it could of Came Harder

HighLights:
Good Flow, And Some Good Punches

DimLights:
Punches Didnt Hit Hard Enough, And two Word Multies Dont Usually Make A Good Battle Verse Unless You Have Great Punches.


Comparison:

Opener : IE, He Came Clean With A Personal And Punch And Good Multies..
Closer : IE, ended With A Good Personal.. Compared To Your Flows Suck.. Hands Down IE Grabs It..
Consistencey : IE Never Let Me Down In His Verse, Where As Joka Had Some Lingering Lines


Vote = I.E.


Good Job To Both..
Please Return An Honest Vote To This Battle Below..
Its Only 6 Lines So Its Just A Quick Vote Thanks..
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