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10-25-04, 08:08 PM
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^^true...this shit was deep, and very good...the only thing missing was the vocabulary...using larger words in a rhyme is a sign of intelligence, and that makes more people want to read it, because it proves that you know what you are talking about and can explain it vividly...anyways...great imaginary...structure...flow...everything was there but the vocab...but still an excellent piece...7.5/10 dawg...nice work...stay up...1 |
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10-25-04, 09:15 PM
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Get Cooked Hoe
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WORD thanks for da feedback mayne yo uppin for more feedback if ya can
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10-26-04, 04:04 PM
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