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Old 11-02-04, 07:38 AM   #1
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Ascending voices echo like a whale’s song in rhyme
I’m trapped inner mind, a capsule that’s lost in time
I don’t know why this void confronts me to this end
But I pretend to continue with life in order for a mend
Send angels for me I can’t live in this darkness anymore
Before I was free with aspirations now locked behind a door
A sore on my family’s branch, the bark of my existence
I wish I was dead, doctor ignore my family’s persistence
Your resistance to let me go has prolonged my agony further
Imagine me in heaven looking down on you with our holy father
You think that I live but realistically you’re just preserving me
Free me from this body you can remember me how I use to be

Please awake,.. It’s been two years, I know you can hear this
Can you feel me twist your wrist, please get out of this abyss
Your missed, mum wants you to come home when this is over
Let me fix your cover, Morgan found you a Four-Leaf clover
I feel this is my all fault, so please forgive me for the accident
All this wasn’t my intention you can’t be heaven’s next resident

How can you sit there, knowing full well what you done
When the clips where discharge you didn’t tell me to run
funny you didn’t say I could end up dead, bullet to the head
I was mislead instead, now I’m dormant on a hospital bed
Slit the bread you said, no reference to the feds being lead
Informed I swear they said, you wanted a piece but got my head

Forget this world, I should have gone to the light when it called
So now I walk thought limbo waiting for heaven to call, but I fall
Into the sub terrains of hell, lost sprits roam, lost in the devils home
The tones of pain call for the throne, bang* stake thought my dome
I wish I was at home, repent my sins now I roam for fresh souls
To own, So I can get back home by paying the Grim Reaper tolls


Holla @ me
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Old 10-27-04, 03:21 AM   #2
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i think i got potential...
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Old 10-27-04, 03:47 AM   #3
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Yea i will consider u for the Roster

BUT u are in D2r and Angelz of Destruktion
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Old 10-27-04, 07:08 PM   #4
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Yea i will consider u for the Roster

BUT u are in D2r and Angelz of Destruktion


meh...im out of AOD im just D2R...can i be both im active enough..i wont miss my posts
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Old 10-27-04, 05:42 AM   #5
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lol change the crew name....
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Old 10-27-04, 08:14 AM   #6
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Old 10-27-04, 11:46 AM   #7
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ok im in D2R but i would like to get in this i got 3 links in my siggy and can yall tell me if im in this holla back
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Old 10-27-04, 02:20 PM   #8
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No...No......And No


.....Nuff Said.........
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Old 10-27-04, 02:30 PM   #9
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thankz man i needed that holla back with a vote or something on one those battles allright if ya like or just feedback on what i need to work on
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Old 10-27-04, 05:48 PM   #10
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so is this like an extended AI.........or something......


Yo whats good DV I'M back baby u scared of the big bad CS.........

LOL.....

j/k
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Old 10-27-04, 06:04 PM   #11
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i got potential and i guess i'm a rookie. i'm down.
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Old 10-27-04, 07:10 PM   #12
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yo, can i join?

i need a crew and i dont have the time 2 really look...

or do u know any1 who mite accept me?
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Old 10-27-04, 07:12 PM   #13
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no. you wont even battle me.
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Old 10-27-04, 07:14 PM   #14
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who tha hell said i wouldnt?

u WANNA battle?

ill set it up.

reg rules.

unlimited lines, deadline 3days (even though ill prolly drop 2marrow nite)

u down?
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Old 10-27-04, 07:17 PM   #15
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we still have a battle up you stupid bitch check in that one and post your verse.
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