Vote= DP

Rhyme shceme was way better... Mutlis was good, punchs were iight...

Mad, you should really get your own style, no dis but That wounded way to like an eminem song ta me..Try to go for a more all out punchline style, or metas ya know?

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yeah dawg, but rhyming how i rhyme is my style, i've made songs but i don't use punchlines that much or not at all, i don't know why

i got KO, nice job darkplanet, you happy?
haha

peace