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Spul | 5 | 71.43% | |
EyeDentikal | 2 | 28.57% | |
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10-30-04, 02:50 PM | #16 |
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uppin for explained honest non d/r votes
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SPul: 20,000/10,000 debt Verbal Abuse: lied about not battling me in verse 4 wins - 1 losses - 1 ko
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10-30-04, 04:22 PM | #17 |
«αи αятιѕт σf ωσя∂ѕ»
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IP: F8D4 A856
uppin' this shit.............................................. ..........8
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10-30-04, 04:25 PM | #18 |
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*ahem* Ahem* Whoa Nice Battle.......but I Cant Vote........but I Can Say That Spul Edge It With Dem Personals And Punches Nice Eye-dentikal U Had Good Punches Wordplay,,,,,,,,,,,,,and Personals,,,,,,,but Spul Had Tha Image,,,,,,,,and Tha Punches,,,,,,,so He Might Get Da Win On This Battle
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10-30-04, 05:37 PM | #19 |
Umm...Yeah
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This was feedback posted for SPuL
IP: 218A A214
road to the buddyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy!!
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10-30-04, 06:39 PM | #20 | |
In ya area.
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IP: 7A3E F05A
Voted For: SPuL
Ok, both of you came with some pretty good punches, but SPuL outshined Scenario there. Both of you pulled some good personals too, Spul had a good one in his closer, Scen had a nice play off "Spulaken". But when it comes down to structure, Spul took it hands down. Scen you still got some work to be doin' on your lines, right now they're quite stretched, so work on shortening them down. Other than that you both dropped good verses, it was actually kinda close, but Spul just performed better all around... Return the favor to a link in my sig, honest explained votes only...
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10-30-04, 07:06 PM | #21 | |
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IP: 1AF0 6ADD
Voted For: EyeDentikal
aight yall this was a fairly tight battle... i liked it, it was fun to check out... it was fairly close tho... Eye has my vote tho with all around better wordplay, punches and personals... aight heres my breakdown.... Wordplay-Eye Punches/personals-Eye Structure-spul Creativity-Eye All around verse-Eye this line from Eyes verse is SOLID, i think it was one of his best... kid made a thread about the RV chat last night, but left out details about how he was in a room with 8 fucking dudes and only 1 female i liked that one a lot, i also liked the closer a lot as well... over all Eye takes this one with an overall better verse, spul your shit was aight, ive seen better tho... no hate tho hommie, he got you on this one tho.... punches and personals win battles... Eye had em so he takes this one............ VOTE-EYEdentikal
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10-30-04, 07:11 PM | #22 | |
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oh yeah and i forgot to add the fact that spul using that GIANT ass pic of Eye was kinda a shitty thing to do, kinda drastic dont ya think? all it was gonna do is show he looks like banks.... so u can used more played banks lines.... any way just add this to my last explination... good battle yall but Eye merked ya spul... no hate tho
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10-30-04, 07:18 PM | #23 |
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IP: F8D4 A856
damn, I didn't make the pic big!!! god damn, that's how it was when I tried puttin' it. but whatever, uppin' this.............................................. ........................................
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10-30-04, 07:28 PM | #24 |
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uppin for honest explained votes peeps
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SPul: 20,000/10,000 debt Verbal Abuse: lied about not battling me in verse 4 wins - 1 losses - 1 ko
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10-30-04, 07:30 PM | #25 | |
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IP: AF76 A123
Voted For: EyeDentikal
Jus like a "waitor" turned "editor"... I'll "serve" you the "news" About how you called out SPuL, and then got... verbal abuse this was a good opener.....8/10 cuz nigga, I will not lose, refuse, to float yo boat ... Don't even start to gloat, cuz like yo sig, you "need a vote not a very good personal/but it was a good punch....7/10 Homo version of Banks, dress like him, his name you takin' Must hate the nigka too, for the gay porn that you be makin' umm...what does making gay porn have to do with hating lloyd banks..........2/10 Nigka you always fakin'... merkin' MC's for fun? ... Hell nah, fag, you be jerkin' inside their bun inside there bun? is this a joke? don't try a personal if you can't follow it up...4/10 Nigka, you better run, you gon' get get shunned, believe me You like... Ass Or Dick...... shit, that's A.O.D!!! umm..yes...initials would be a.o.d....good job....6/10 Nigka, don't step and change, cuz you're slow, jus like yo flows The chances of you winnin' is small... kinda like yo fuckin' nose this was weak....cause the nose itself doesn't define whether or not a person is attractive or not...therfor...you were making a statement..and not making fun of him...... 2/10 You holdin' shit in,bee... you kno we fuckin' kno it Look at yo face, you kno it too, your mouth expression show it this was funny...good personal...but it could have been worded better.....7/10 Ain't no poet, why you flow it, nigka you flex in vain There's a gap in our skill levels, hoe, like yo neck and chain's just because theres a gap...it doesn't imply who is better...so that wasn';t very complete.......6/10 overall score 42/80 average score per bar = 5.25/10 over all..you had a few good lines....but some were really incredibly weak...i know your talented..you just didn't do well in this battle..i think you were goin for somethin...but whatever it was..it wasn't effective..atleast not with me....no hate....i'm just callin it like i see it... now i know that sexual lines are played but spul really must be gay he's battling tha q, five source ceo with banks attempting a 3 way good opener/personal 9/10 kid seems to get attached to hookers who like to search for net dick cause without a job, welfare, or $ going to the bank would be hectic umm...wasn't feelin too much....4/10 punches and bars r damaging ya perfect record, i'll leave spul aken cause posing as banks in gay porn was how his virginity was taken didn't like this....4/10 u even said it ya damn self "this fag gonna get it" then u cheered why? cause u be forever getting spermed delivered in ya rear this gay stuff is gettin old...2/10 don't know why u even accepted this battle cause i slaughter foes so u stand aside and tell ya bitch bend over cause i daughter hoz 2nd line was played...2/10 kid made a thread about the RV chat last night, but left out details about how he was in a room with 8 fucking dudes and only 1 female good personal.....9/10 ain't no denying it, spul coversated with a boy named dicklicious that really shows that spul like to grab on more men then sid vicious good punch....8/10 kid went and said i d/r banks, u tried to d/r me, oh u a fan of mine spul tries his best to match my every single move like a pantomime decent....7/10 i just wish more peeps in this damn world would practice abstinece do u see what happens when cher and prince mate, an accident funny personal...but sort of lacking for some reason..7/10 why u get mad on AIM, kid got hyped up over ducking accusations spul wins?, better chance of arm amputees conducting masterbation hahahaha..good closer.....9/10 overall score 61/100 average score per bar = 6.1/10 overall this wasn't a good verse for you....you had some good lines....but the gay jokes in the middle were getting repetitive...and they were uncreative...that took away a lot from your verse...this battle could have been a whole lot better...much respect to both of you though....vote......Dentikal
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10-30-04, 08:46 PM | #26 | |
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JUst checking the plls.............................................. ..................
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10-30-04, 08:48 PM | #27 | |
Bonecrushing Nigga
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NVM.. i wanna take back this feedback and vote... cos it looks good...............
SPuL or Eyedentikal PM strobe to do it... cos a vote will be in one of youir hands.. LOL.....
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10-30-04, 08:52 PM | #28 |
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aiight, jus vote, and whoever you vote for can PM strobe to do it...........................
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10-30-04, 09:04 PM | #29 |
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IP: EFEB C28B
Voted For: SPuL
good battle... both had a good flow but i think spal came much harder with punches N diss hes verse had me going more into it then u'rs he was more creative N just at u raw i thought but u drop decent.... vote: spal.... return the favor of a vote on this hot close battle that just went down.... http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=158022 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
10-30-04, 09:14 PM | #30 | |
Bonecrushing Nigga
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IP: 98C0 39B0
This isnt a DR...... i think both of you are dope... so not a dr....
now i know that sexual lines are played but spul really must be gay he's battling tha q, five source ceo with banks attempting a 3 way No..... not a good one at all..... kid seems to get attached to hookers who like to search for net dick cause without a job, welfare, or $ going to the bank would be hectic ok flow.....not good line....but decent punches and bars r damaging ya perfect record, i'll leave spul aken cause posing as banks in gay porn was how his virginity was taken This was a very good line.. nice play on his name....and good flow u even said it ya damn self "this fag gonna get it" then u cheered why? cause u be forever getting spermed delivered in ya rear wtf.. no this is not good... the last line in this bar shuda been better i don't know why u even accepted this battle cause i slaughter foes so u stand aside and tell ya bitch bend over cause i daughter hoz This is a Self Glori... so no.. not good... "I Slughter Foes"=glorifying kid made a thread about the RV chat last night, but left out details about how he was in a room with 8 fucking dudes and only 1 female LOL.... nice shit.... a very good lines nice personal ain't no denying it, spul coversated with a boy named dicklicious that really shows that spul like to grab on more men then sid vicious fflow wasnt on target... and it wasnt that great kid went and said i d/r banks, u tried to d/r me, oh u a fan of mine spul tries his best to match my every single move like a pantomime no.. this isnt a punch.... the first lines could've been better. but the other line killed it... i just wish more peeps in this damn world would practice abstinece do u see what happens when cher and prince mate, an accident not direct......not a good bar why u get mad on AIM, kid got hyped up over ducking accusations spul wins?, better chance of arm amputees conducting masterbation Ok Closer.. could've been worded a lil better ummmm Scenario... tyhis wasnt your best verse.. i 've seen better from you... ovreall yours was pretty much good... excpet some of your bars start of with a lil self glorification... but it was good...also the fact that 1/4 of your verse was about banks... made it slightly less interestign and that gay banks crap is old.... i heard it from alot of other kids.... but the fact that you played it to a kid that loves G Uint made it slighty good and personal...... nice though.... Score: 7.5/10 . Jus like a "waitor" turned "editor"... I'll "serve" you the "news" About how you called out SPuL, and then got... verbal abuse i got what ya meant here... but i didint like how ya opener was started cuz nigga, I will not lose, refuse, to float yo boat ... Don't even start to gloat, cuz like yo sig, you "need a vote" weak as fuck... dumb line Homo version of Banks, dress like him, his name you takin' Must hate the nigka too, for the gay porn that you be makin' lol..... kinda personal cos of his pic.. cos he does look like banks.. ok Nigka you always fakin'... merkin' MC's for fun? ... Hell nah, fag, you be jerkin' inside their bun damn... this was weak as hell...... gay shit too.. Nigka, you better run, you gon' get get shunned, believe me You like... Ass Or Dick...... shit, that's A.O.D!!! wtf... this wasnt all that good.... Nigka, don't step and change, cuz you're slow, jus like yo flows The chances of you winnin' is small... kinda like yo fuckin' nose this had me laughing...nice persnoal... You holdin' shit in,bee... you kno we fuckin' kno it Look at yo face, you kno it too, your mouth expression show it rhyme scheme was dumb... but also had me laughing Ain't no poet, why you flow it, nigka you flex in vain There's a gap in our skill levels, hoe, like yo neck and chain's this was a ok closer.... your shit was fucking weak man......compared to what you had in that tourny or what you had agaisnt Feebs... but it was ok.. some of your lines were just straght fuckied up... i didnt liked how you rhymed so scnario get that... also ya flow was ok but not as good as scenarios...also you had some played concepts..... Scenario took it with the punches by a very lil bit... but SPuL took the personals stirght.....also thr LMAO factor was givin to SPUL.. it was very funny... but was good... Score: 7.8 kinda close but i gave this to SPuL for strong personals.... and no self glorification.... which threw off some of Scenarios verses....
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