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ThugLife 0 0%
Eyvon 5 100.00%
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Old 11-07-04, 04:43 PM   #1
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Voted For: Eyvon

a battler, and a self glorifier

punches- Eyvon cuz u had em
personals- neither
metas- Eyvon cuz u had em
multis- neither
structue- Eyvon just more consistency
flow- Eyvon
humor- Eyvon made me smile
word play- neither

Eyvon ok verse, lot of self glorification, but also a lot of punches. try some personals next time.

Thug u had no punches, personals, multis, metas, etc... well wait u had one very weak punch. throw punches and elevate

No Hate Just An Honest Voter v/Eyvon

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Old 11-15-04, 07:28 PM   #2
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thank ya thank ya.... much thanx...


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Old 11-17-04, 11:56 AM   #3
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Voted For: Eyvon

Eyvon got this... His verse was better....... You had bad structure but it was better than Demestiks..... You had some good flow... some hard witing punches and nice personals...... Demestik.. you need to elevate homie... No hate....
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Old 11-17-04, 12:08 PM   #4
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Voted For: Eyvon

eyvon got this hands down, yo.....she murked you dawg...some of those lines didnt even rhyme....she simply came harder throughout....

my advice:
eyvon....yo punches is good, you just need to up ya creativety and think out tha box....also, some of yo lines were a bit stretched, you can add multis to help that...keep it up yo...

thuglife....you need to up ya whole game. you gonna get murked a lot droppin lyke that. you got tha vocab, and thats really all you got...keep battling and reading battles of tha better people....

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