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Old 11-09-04, 09:35 PM   #16
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Introspect it was cute..??
ahh fuck it i respect that.....

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thats weerd....i actually say 4/10

come on now speak the truth dont be a average hater give props when it counts...
plus i aint even mention ya name....
lucky i wasnt thinking i was just flowing....

dont be regular haters everyone if its hot say it was there is a few people that said it was hot...
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ahh-fuck it as-long as ya notice we aint ducking and we aint no lames we cool N have a equal understanding....
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Old 11-09-04, 10:19 PM   #17
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this wasn't too good
the creativity wasnt there,you had fake and played personals n disses,although the flow was good and the structure was okay iguess....it started off a little choppy,the concept was coo.......

no hate....just feedback

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Old 11-10-04, 12:06 AM   #18
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i think that you guys accomplished what you set out to do. these verses werent your guys' best work (no disrespect), but you handled business. personally, i liked the piece. the flow and structure was a little off in places, but thats expected from a spur of the moment drop. you still held it down for your team. keep up the good work v.t. battlecats......

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Old 11-10-04, 03:04 AM   #19
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yo loveliss handle yo bizness these muhfuckas talk shit let them kno the bizness i had my beef wit empire to awhile back, fuck that puss ass bitch, but do yo thang pimpin good diss
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Old 11-10-04, 06:38 AM   #20
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Good drop men that was twisted you have a gift embrace it!! Diss me and i'll kick your ass jk I'm high right now. Halo 2 came out today woo hoo
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Old 11-10-04, 11:10 AM   #21
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thanks for everyone feed back im feeling the love....
upp'in for more feed back....
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Old 11-10-04, 11:26 AM   #22
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dat was an ight drop....i reely wasnt interested until the second verse...first one wus pretty borin

6/10

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Old 11-10-04, 09:01 PM   #23
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upp'in this shit...........
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Old 11-11-04, 12:52 PM   #24
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Old 12-04-04, 09:22 AM   #25
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Old 01-29-05, 10:47 AM   #26
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