uppin....................................

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upp'in for MORE HONEST VOTES...
WITH BRAKE-DOWNS....

this is still open with the same votes??? WTF?? upp'in for votes........

upp'in this joint........................................

Voted For: Razzle Dazzle

v/one m.b

one-damn this was a hot verse.....you def had soooooooooooooo much flow it just rolled off the tip of my tongue....and then i just spit ur verse as i read it and it sounded even better..........i like the idea of this new battle style tooo.............you had soo much imagery and a lil humor.......very very very nice multi's.....haha which is just expected by you...................very nice vocab......you came more creative and more thought out the topic as you spit....and everything just worked together......which is how it should be.....good drop i was astonished by the flow

inensity-you came more with punches here......but this wasnt really about the punches and stuff.........it was more like a topical battle in a way just about being violent........but you came with good multi's .....some of ya lines didnt include being violent.......you shoulda focused on the violence more cuz thats what this battle was about...........and i dont think ur structure was too bad cuz multi's can create longer lines.....which i have no prob with......

good battle

return the favor
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...ewpost&t=163144
honest and explained

v/one m.b
peace~1

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yo this was fire hot lava, one verse was sick nice multis and all good picture in my head as u spit and I.E verse was hot like fire 2 i mean hes punches was raw he had a good picture in my head the ending was nasty with the nuts N hair shit but if i could vote it would be for I.E i thought he had the more enjoyable verse that flow better off my toung close one

Voted For: intensify effect

alright if i had to vote who won punch wise then raz got this but since its violence then I.E got this..

I.E:

you had a pretty dope verse ... the gore and violence was definately better than raz's... you got real descriptive which was dope showed the imagery... decent structure could have been better even the lines up... flow was pretty good also good verse..

overall : 8.5/10

ra..daz..

your verse was good but not as violent and since this is how you wanted people to vote then i think you lose.... and also some of the multies kinda threw off the flow i know your trademark is multies but they didnt work too well here you also need to work on ya structure even it up

overall: 7.4/10

vote: I.E

return the favor on any battle in my sig plz!!!!

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just checking polls......

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CrhymeSindicate

'Till Death

^^^ why are u check'in polls u should of voted.....................

upp'in........

good vote... but eh? even up my structure?? it was pretty even i thought... and his was overshot and stuff... i just didnt get your logic on that...

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^^^ i aint complain or quote any of u'r votes....

why u trying to sway votes????

go ahead if you wanna... votes dont dq themselves...

that guys vote just didnt make any sense to me.. im not gonna dq it.. i hate dqin votes.. its cool if its just some subjective thing like he liked one verse more than the other... but some of the stuff is just like what...

by the way, you cant sway votes with the new system... the only thing other people see is our verses.

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Voted For: Razzle Dazzle

I.E-
Creativity: not bad at all, you through some punches in there that helped with this-
Flow: man ur bars are really kinda long, even with the use of the multies it didn't flow great for me.
Violence Level: pretty violent, I kinda expected more but it wasn't bad....

razzle:
Creativity: you a multi head case like me so I generally find ur shit right up my alley, your verse was more what I expected where you pretty much just went out on a descriptive rampage.
Flow: flowed better than your opponents, lines nice and equal length, real easy read here....
Level of Violence: I'd say this was slightly more violent than your opponents just for the fact you don't shovin punchlines in it, you stuck to the task at hand and described a pretty bloody scene, good job... i think this was a cool idea to be done, props to both, I vote Razzle.... please return the fav guy... http://community.rapverse.com/showb...d=1#post1807015

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Voted For: intensify effect

This Style Is Pretty Gay But Whatever...
This Kid Had More Ways Of Death And Even Tied Punches Into That...
He Also Had A Cleaner Structure...
And Ya, He Was The Most Violent???...
Lololmao, Ya So Thats Whats Up...
I Hope This Style Doesnt Make It Off The Grownd...
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