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Old 11-12-04, 01:46 AM   #1
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Old 11-12-04, 12:23 PM   #2
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Voted For: sabotage

sab-
had some pucnhes had some ok flow was alright ad a few good ryhmes n punches hit weak but came ok it was a good verse nuttin wrong just the end hardly rhymed but it was still mostly good i gotta give it a 7/10

l-c-
he came very weak had no stuckture at all had not many punches even when he did they came weakish didnt have no flow the rhymes at the end didnt rhyme thats was wack n weak dude give it a 2/10u cud of done better

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i gotta give my vote to sab he came kiinda weak put had it enuf to beat the other guy both cud of improved by sab won this 1 1 sided all the way l-c had no stuckture at all sab wins came harder
 
Old 11-12-04, 03:48 PM   #3
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Old 11-12-04, 09:53 PM   #5
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Old 11-12-04, 11:08 PM   #6
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sab-you had much betta structure.....lol u had some good metas like tha peter parker line.........u ahd some pretty good personals also .....flow was good.....closer was good also

lyric-structure was horrible....ryhme scheme was off....u had some aight multies punches really werent connecting keep elevating

v/sab
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Old 11-13-04, 05:37 AM   #7
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Old 11-13-04, 04:51 PM   #8
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Old 11-13-04, 08:32 PM   #10
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flow was better...
punches was more creative more direct N land'ed much harder..
creativeness was decent....
all around i enjoyed hes verse more....

lyri-cali i've seen much better from u...
ya flow was ok...
ya punches was weak lack'in N un-creative preety much basic...
creativeness like i said was basic N i aint really feel none of ya bars...
sorry man u got handle here but good try...
 
Old 11-13-04, 08:33 PM   #11
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can u drop a honest vote in my battle with exsclusive.....
 
Old 11-13-04, 09:04 PM   #12
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This was feedback posted for sabotage

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Not quite sure how this system works, but sabotage seemed to have better punchlines and diss factor. The structure was basic, and nothing really that makes one's eyes widen in awe, but it was enough to sieze this battle.

My vote, if I was eligible, would be for sabotage.

I'm doing this namely to see how the vote thing works.
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Old 11-14-04, 02:25 AM   #13
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sabo
nothing witty, but you had some connecting punches and disses, the peter parker was the nicest line, but it was filler so that took away from your verse.

[u]lyri[/u
a lot of your verse is filler.. and I seen played rhyme schemes like with the 'losin' thing going on, try to be more original and think of shit nobody has said.

Return the favor please.
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