thats wut happens when u battle me, shit gets closed hella late...uppn...lets put this one away

more votes needed.. lets go peepz.. honest and explained

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uppin this battle peopel...lets get some votes on this

UPPIN.. we need some votes!! explain em and keep em honest

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uppn, this battle...lets get this put away hoes

votes needed.. lets keep em comin....

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VOTE!!!!... or I will kill you all! MUAHAHAHAHHAHAHAA

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Voted For: RED BEAM



You think your unbreakable but you spit wit a flaw...
Sayin the same thing over n over again like Tim McGraw...
who the fuck is tim mcgraw weak as fuck

before your records an embarrassment...
Wont be underground even if you were in the basement...
this shit dont rhyme for shit and ya verse was weak as fuck from there on u aint have shit to say in this battle



gkillahs, im bout to rob u for my easy win
treat u like "a lotto scratcher" im bout to show u "the big spin"
weak


u aint hardcore...release them thoughts from yo brain
im something like "sideshow bob" when im going insane
pic looks preety funny punch wasnt that good

here is the turning point


u think u somewhere at the top, but i spoil ya dreams steady
and have u tumble down slowly like a party full of confeddy

my punches'll fade you up, matter fact, give u a taper
"RIP" this canada fag apart like a blank sheet of paper

those 2 was the reason i picked u as the winner it was decent and the rest of both verse was weak and trash im mad as hell i actully took time to vote on this

well thanx anyway...uppn...i'll return all the votes for everybody who voted in here....HONESTLY

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we need some votes people !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Voted For: GKillaz05

ehhh....this was an okay battle...

GKillaz, i thought ya verse was okay...the structure was on point and so was the flow...i didnt see any personals...and the punches were meh...next time, u gotta think of more fresh concepts...good consistency...

Red Beam, ya verse was meh...i didnt really like the structure, but there still was a good flow to it...i didnt see any personals in your verse either...and your punches were meh too...but what brought u down was the inconsistency...a lot of the lines were filler or didnt hit hard....

V/ GKillaz, by a hair.....it was a close one...

i'd appreciate if both/either of u drop an honest vote here:
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=157669

Voted For: RED BEAM

red beam got this one

GK-You think your unbreakable but you spit wit a flaw...
Sayin the same thing over n over again like Tim McGraw...
^^okay punch good opener
Withdraw your account...
before your records an embarrassment...
Wont be underground even if you were in the basement...
^structure was fucked up and didnt rhyme that much wack punch attempt
Could write your spit in crayon and it wouldnt melt...
Leavin' you wit more holes then on a fat mans belt....
Red Beams fucked like Robin without Batmans help...
^^okay punch coulda been better
Dawg lets out a yelp... like im standin on his tail...
Couldnt feel your lines even if they were in braillie...
^^okay punch if it wasnt played
You fail to realize you cant rap without a vocabulary...
If you punched with a knife you would stab me rarly...
^^weak punch coulda been harder if worded better
Actin like Darth Vader swinging around your red beam...
I just merked ya now tell us how being dead seems...
^^ dont make much sence cuz merkin some1 dont make them dead...okay for a closer i guess

coulda came harder and punches and peronsals lacked.you did a punch about vocab and actually u needed it too...structure was okay kinda messed up in some spots saw a few multi's flow was okay...4/10

red-gkillahs, im bout to rob u for my easy win
treat u like "a lotto scratcher" im bout to show u "the big spin"
^^lol good opener but structure was off
u aint hardcore...release them thoughts from yo brain
im something like "sideshow bob" when im going insane
^^nice punch but a lil self glorification
U wunna call yo self raw, but ur spam aint beef
we can dig deeper in dirt, than athletes rockin cleets
^^lol good punch flow was nice
u think u somewhere at the top, but i spoil ya dreams steady
and have u tumble down slowly like a party full of confeddy
^^haha humerous punch..its spelled confetti
my punches'll fade you up, matter fact, give u a taper
"RIP" this canada fag apart like a blank sheet of paper
^^okay punch coulda been better
im nuthin to play wit, told u once, and now u headed for danger
look dawg, mind ya folks, dont beef with strangers
^^okay punch coulda been a little harder if worded better
tha morale of this story...is how a coward got merked
i cant "RIP" u all day, eat some breakfast first
^^good closer okay punch

lacked vocab...structure was good..punches were hittin...kinda weak personal....no multi's....flowed pretty good....okay drop...
7/10

v/RED BEAM

peace~1

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Voted For: RED BEAM

well neither one of you had a multi to be found in the whole verse...............not too great of a battle.....could have been better........gkilla your opening line was weak....but u came a lot harder towards the middle of your verse......if your whole verse would have been like a few lines in the middle.....you would have won this.....your flow was decent and so was beams.....no wordplay from either really.....red beam had a few bars with better wordplay.....punches is why i voted for beam on this one.....he had more of them and his were a lot better in my opinion....after all it is a battle....and the person with the better punches has to win.....multis could have played a big factor in this battle if one of you would have used any.....there was also no vocab in this battle....that also could have played a big part in it.........no hate to either on of you.....just the way i felt......good luck to both........return the favor with an honest vote on my battle and topical in my sig...thanks

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